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Reviewer: stacey
Anonymous
Date: 04/11/06 - 12:57PM
Title: Two Wrongs Make It All Alright
I'm sitting here reading this threw my tears...i hate u but love u at the same time for writting this story. I think one of the most simplest but most powerful sentences i have ever read in a story has to be... "She got me. Ihad her. We lost us"
Reviewer: amk16
Signed
Date: 07/07/05 - 11:12AM
Title: Two Wrongs Make It All Alright
I can't believe it, but I am sitting here crying like I just experienced all of that. They can't just fall apart. Then again, maybe they didn't fall apart, but they belong together. Maybe in ten years, they'll be their own people, and they'll find one another and realize what it was that was missing or subtracting from the balance that they need.
I'm gonna' stop typing becasue I can barely see the screen, but once again, you're mad talented. Very moving chapter. I will definitely read all of your fiction, especially if it's a sequal.
Reviewer: amk16
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Date: 07/07/05 - 10:37AM
Title: Another Love TKO
Once again, I'm in awe of your talent. I have to say, it actually made me laugh, but, damn, they were getting philosophical. Now, what exactly does Michelle have to say about that?
Reviewer: amk16
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Date: 07/07/05 - 10:15AM
Title: Maybe We'll Fly the Night Away
that was unbelievable. That one paragraph about her ironic dichotomy was absolutely brilliant and the way that the love scene wasn't just a cheap visual thrown in the middle, but it actually tied into the story and made perfect sense. If you couldn't tell, i absolutely loved it. You're very talented.
Reviewer: amk16
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Date: 07/07/05 - 09:47AM
Title: Grown or Outgrown?
Hey, I've actually been reading this story for a while now on your site and I'm hooked. I love Justin's new vibe. when they first broke up, I thought that Justin would be the immature, flaunt with my badself type, but I'm really surprised. Michelle wants her cake, but she wants to eat it too. She better pull her head out of whatever body part it's stuck in and recognize that Justin isn't going to wait for her forever. I have a feeling that she'll come to her senses soon, so I'll go back to reading now.
Reviewer: ~Ashley~
Anonymous
Date: 04/28/05 - 06:13PM
Title: Two Wrongs Make It All Alright
I loved you're story was definitley not expecting that ending. Very well done!
Reviewer: Samantha
Anonymous
Date: 10/27/04 - 11:36PM
Title: Two Wrongs Make It All Alright
I'm crying, like there is no tomarrow. The story had me on the egde of my seat, and I can't belived it had ended that way. You are a great writer. Please continue with you work.
Reviewer: Timberlake
Anonymous
Date: 09/23/04 - 05:05PM
Title: Two Wrongs Make It All Alright
OMG! I can barely breathe. That's so sad. How could they just fall apart? That's so sad. My heart is breaking. Oh, I hope Justin never goes through that. Or anyone for that matter. *tear*
Reviewer: Timberlake
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Date: 09/21/04 - 06:37PM
Title: Roses Stink
Oh shit, I cried. That's some good writing!
Reviewer: aisha
Anonymous
Date: 09/21/04 - 10:43AM
Title: Two Wrongs Make It All Alright
omg! it's not really gonna end like that is it! ahh, i'm in tears! that was amazingly written but very sad. pleeeease do a sequal... i love j and chelle! great job.
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