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Reviewer: aisha
Anonymous
Date: 06/14/04 - 04:22PM
Title: After the Show, It's the Afterparty
okay, the bitch is CRAZY lol. justin really needs to put a foot down before it ruins them. :o(
Reviewer: Mariah111384
Signed
Date: 06/13/04 - 11:12PM
Title: After the Show, It's the Afterparty
That was good. Really, I liked it. I really liked the end. Good job Ashley. :) I wanna know what happens now. lol
Reviewer: Erin
Anonymous
Date: 06/13/04 - 06:35PM
Title: After the Show, It's the Afterparty
YAY! Updates! I've been checking back every day to see if this has been updated!
I love this story! It's AWESOME! Great writing.
What's up with Michelle?
Anyways.. I can't wait for more! :D
Reviewer: Raven
Anonymous
Date: 06/13/04 - 06:13PM
Title: After the Show, It's the Afterparty
Well despite what one person thinks, I enjoy this story so much and I hope you continue because you're an excellent writer. Mediocre is a huge understatement. And as for this chapter, what the hell is up with Michelle? I agree with Justin, man. Get a grip girlie!
Reviewer: aimee
Anonymous
Date: 06/13/04 - 04:08PM
Title: After the Show, It's the Afterparty
oh man, she would drive me insane! jeeeez
Reviewer: Mariah111384
Signed
Date: 06/13/04 - 03:20AM
Title: 82505
OK, many people so it seems may really dislike me for what I'm about to say and please don't beat me down for saying this but I'm just really confused with the idea of this whole story. This is just my personal opinion on the reading the story as a whole so if I offend you, I deeply apologize. This whole story is really confusing me. The writing is sort of mediocre and the plot drabbles a lot. I'm trying to really get into it but I find it hard because it feels like the concept is a tad too cliche. It also feels like some of the sex parts are not really needed. Basically, honestly, there's no storyline. What's this character about? What are Michelle and Justin trying to do? It sounds kind of soap opra-ish. I guess when I'm basically trying to get across is that the ideas are kind of unorthodox for my liking. Doesn't mean at all that it's unlikeable, just really, I don't know, I'm finding a little difficulty understanding the purpose and the reason. Is there a lesson being learned? If not, what are you trying to put out there? These are questions I go with everytime I write anything. Bottom-line: your story is not really moving me anywhere. Again, I apologize, but it's how I feel.
Author's Response: Well Audrey, I thank you for your opinion, which you're always entitled to. I'm not forcing you to read it, but perhaps once you get to the end, you'll see the theme for what it is. Every author has their own way of teaching with their writing, and I'm not one to yell 'HEY, LOVE ISN'T PERFECT.' But if you're not enjoying it, by no means am I asking you to torture yourself by continuing to read. Thanks for the review, though. See you around, sweetheart.
Reviewer: aisha
Anonymous
Date: 06/12/04 - 09:42PM
Title: 82505
yes! finally an update. glad you worked everything out! so nsync is absolutely awesome, aren't they. glad latoya won! and the j/brit and ashton/britt was awesome work. you're great at this. so far, i'm glad they went public. and i loved their outfit coordination! woo! more!
Reviewer: Diana
Anonymous
Date: 06/12/04 - 03:51AM
Title: 82505
haha love the update. the whole brit and justin comments.. they were funny n good. keep it up!
Reviewer: SparklyBubbles2
Signed
Date: 06/12/04 - 12:36AM
Title: More Details
*sings* Even though I try, I can't let go... something in your eyes, captures my soooulll.... Every night I see you in my dreams...you're all I know, I can't let go...
Still loving it. :o)
Reviewer: aisha
Anonymous
Date: 06/08/04 - 10:08AM
Title: Details
okay, i'm dying here. update!!!!
Author's Response: I'm SO sorry y'all! I've been outta town, and been trying to post the next chapters for a while now, but I'm having some technical difficulties lol. So I'm waitin' on the webmaster to contact me and HELP! I truly apologize, but I haven't forgotten about y'all lol. And THANKS so much for reading. Stick around! lol
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