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I've been reading this story on the JJB board, but I decided to leave you some feedback here though. Alright, what's up with Justin and all this fawning over Natalie? What does he know about her that makes him love her so? Or maybe "love" isn't the right word. Maybe it's more of a "like" or "infatuation" type of thing. I dunno. But why isn't he seeing someone on the side too? I mean, they aren't committed together. She goes back to her boyfriend everytime she leaves him...so why shouldn't he have someone too? And I dunno if anyone here has said it, but I've heard ppl on the JJB talking about how they think Michael is cheating on Natalie. And I didn't really believe it until he kinda rejected her on the beach and then not that long after has a convenient little "business trip" for the weekend. But that at least gives Natalie and Justin some time together, so they can finally really get to know each other. And find out why they like each or so much. Or maybe find out that they don't really like each other like they thought they did. Anyways, great update. Looking forward to the next one.

Author's Response: Wow, thanks for the lengthy feedback. Sometimes, there's no real reason for why we feel a certain way about other people...there's just some kind of underlying connection, I guess. Natalia's a complicated character, I think. She's not exactly admirable, and sometimes you want to just smack some sense into her already, but for some reason, he sees something in her and cares about her a lot. And Justin doesn't have anyone else on the side because he doesn't want anyone else on the side. He just wants her, and he's hoping that someday she'll realize she just wants him. At the same time, he doesn't want to push her because he risks losing her altogether. I'm not going to comment on the Michael thing, but it's fun to see people speculate. I'm so glad you're enjoying my story. Hope you keep reading!

yeah that's what I'm talking about! She knew she couldn't forget about Justin. I mean hello?! Have you seen the man! lol All weekend long! Great! :o) She needs to dump Michael and fast! And you know what? If that was her and Justin on the beach...oh yeah...it would've been on and poppin'! LOL Hopefully when I get back from out of town I'll have a new chapter to read. Update soon!! :o) :o)

Ah, I knew she wouldn't be able to stay away. She needs to break up with Michael. Like...now.

Author's Response: Patience my dear. ;) You were one of my first readers, so thanks so much for sticking with me.

I'm so glad that you updated. But why did Michael have to go and be so sweet and charming? I'm still rooting for Justin but that wore me down a little bit. I hope you update again. I can't wait to find out what happens next. (But I guess I'll have to. LOL)

Author's Response: It was all a part of my evil plot. Heh. Didn't you once ask me if I had any other stories? Well, I have a website now. There are various authors on there, but I'm co-writing a story with my friend called "Broken." You might want to check it out. Here's the link: http://www.geocities.com/beautifuldisasters2004/public_html/ Thanks for the feedback!