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Reviewer: Dreamer
Anonymous
Date: 07/16/04 - 02:54PM
Title: Chapter 11
OOOOKay....whatever....let's see how long she can stay away from him...I know I wouldn't last long........i love it...update soon
Reviewer: Dreamer
Anonymous
Date: 07/16/04 - 02:44PM
Title: Chapter 10
Get rid of Michael now..... I hate him so much.....he sucks BIG TIME!!! I want Justin and Natlia to get together now
Author's Response: Wow, thanks for much for your enthusiasm for my story. It's awesome to see what you think of each chapter. Hopefully, you'll keep reading.
Reviewer: Dreamer
Anonymous
Date: 07/16/04 - 02:30PM
Title: Chapter 9
“Maybe you should take a nap,” she offered. “That’s what I do when I get tired. Here, you can sleep with Minnie!” She held up her hand with the doll in it.
“She doesn’t want your dumb doll,” Tyler said.
Zoe stuck her tongue out at him. “I wasn’t talking to you, poopie head.”
That was so cute.....but thought it was so rude when Nat went to Justin's and he was like 'wanna talk about it' and she was like 'i didn't come here to talk' like what the hell?...i love the story but she can't keep using him...Michael, Monica, Trace he sister...someone's gotta find out...but i'm glad she told him aboout her sister after the sex
Reviewer: Dreamer
Anonymous
Date: 07/16/04 - 02:18PM
Title: Chapter 8
Okay what a skanky ass how at the end of the chapter.......Justin leaned back on his elbows, and she slowly crawled up onto his lap, straddling his waist and wrapping her arms around his neck again................that was so damn cute.....i could picture it totaly....awww adn i wished it was me
Reviewer: Dreamer
Anonymous
Date: 07/16/04 - 02:02PM
Title: Chapter 7
WOOOOO! Twice in one week. Go Natalia.....I love it....theya re so cute....lol...can't wait to read more
Reviewer: Miranda@aol.com
Anonymous
Date: 07/16/04 - 01:55PM
Title: Chapter 11
This story had me captivated from the first few lines of Chapter 1...So captivated that I was sitting at work not wanting to deal with customers just so I could keep reading. This clifhanger is killing me! More soon please. I'm sure the visitors at my site would love to read your story. It's wonderful!
Author's Response: Thanks so much! That's awesome that you were that captivated by it. If you don't mind my asking, what's your site?
Reviewer: Dreamer
Signed
Date: 07/16/04 - 01:48PM
Title: Chapter 6
please say she's going back to justins...though for some reason i totally doubt it but I really loved when Trace said this while he was sitting down with Natalia and Monica for lunch "Don’t mind him. He’s gay.”...........lol it was so funny....i hate michael
Reviewer: Dreamer
Signed
Date: 07/16/04 - 01:36PM
Title: Chapter 5
I thihnk I'm in love with...Bella. She's just too cute but Marriage!?!? and Babies?!?!? if she only knew...lol.....its great i love it....very cute....just had to add that wrod
Reviewer: Dreamer
Signed
Date: 07/16/04 - 01:23PM
Title: Chapter 4
So perfect......a sweaty half naked Justin and Natalia just happens to be there... I can't wait to see hat happens between them.
Reviewer: Dreamer
Signed
Date: 07/16/04 - 01:13PM
Title: Chapter 3
Ohhh they want eahc other.....cute...lol....i love it
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