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Reviewer: FantaCwriter
Signed
Date: 04/17/06 - 06:01PM
Title: Teacher's Pet
I just found this visual on the random feature and wanted to let you know it's pretty good. I don't see where it was porn-ish, because the two characters obviously knew each other quite well. And as a former teacher, sometimes the need for 'distraction' is a good thing. LOL It was a nice read without it being cheesy or smarmy. Good job! Author's Response: Thank you! I wrote this the semester I student taught and was needing an escape from teaching 7th graders. I didn\'t really write it with the idea of porn-on-paper but I didn\'t want to write something with phrases like "quivering loins" or "ample bosom." I wanted something that read just like I saw it in my head. Thanks for giving the story a chance.
Reviewer: Kara
Anonymous
Date: 02/22/05 - 12:02PM
Title: Teacher's Pet
The writing seemed sort of Dawson's Creek ish. I really couldn't understand the purpose of it. It seemed to me like it flowed too quickly. I didn't get anything from it. Yeah, I agree it was sort of like a porn, but it didn't have enough dept for me to like it.
Reviewer: Baby
Anonymous
Date: 02/19/05 - 03:35PM
Title: Teacher's Pet
Didn't like it. It sort of flowed like a porn to me. I didn't feel anything sorry.
Author's Response: Thank you for your honesty. It flowed like a porn because it was written like a porn. Sorry you didn't enjoy.
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