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Reviewer: Briana
Anonymous
Date: 08/01/06 - 04:45AM
Title: Skeletons In The Closet
This was a nice twist to the story, however, if it's going to be that JC and Brianna were engaged, you need to convey in some way in the beginning that the two could have possibly known each other instead of having them meet and learn everything about each other.
Reviewer: meaghan
Anonymous
Date: 02/20/06 - 07:26PM
Title: Final Surrender
ok, that was really.....something. not a bad something, just something. its so hard for me to picture any of the guys actually hating each other so when i read a story where they hate each other....its a little strange. but anyways, story was great and i really did enjoy it!!
Reviewer: Kat
Anonymous
Date: 02/15/06 - 01:49PM
Title: Final Surrender
Wow! Twists and turns all over! I loved it. I was enthralled thoughout the whole story. Excellent job!
Reviewer: jenna
Anonymous
Date: 04/01/05 - 06:51AM
Title: Final Surrender
the whole story got me confuse cuz' you never really explain in is totally what was the pla, and about jc and briana engaged etc.. so we learn bit by bit but still its misse'd some pieces to the puzzle
except than that , good story , even if i could never imagine JC this bad !lol
im mean it's revolted me , lol
anyway congratulations
Reviewer: Rosa
Anonymous
Date: 11/19/04 - 06:45PM
Title: Final Surrender
I loved the story, I think u did a great job...but the ending had me a little confused..lol....great job anyways.
Reviewer: UTCBeauty2004
Anonymous
Date: 11/19/04 - 05:00PM
Title: Final Surrender
i'm confused who was the guy?
Author's Response: The guy is Justin. It says it toward the end when he and Brianna are talking.
Reviewer: Gigi
Anonymous
Date: 11/19/04 - 03:36PM
Title: Final Surrender
I loved the whole story and that ending had me in tears.
Reviewer: Gigi
Anonymous
Date: 11/09/04 - 12:11AM
Title: My Happy Ending
U r making me crazy with that ending! Come on now you can't leave us hanging like this you just can't!!!
Reviewer: UTCBeauty
Anonymous
Date: 11/08/04 - 11:20PM
Title: My Happy Ending
omg....did he commit suicide or did he shoot her..or did he shoot justin...man.......woooo see that's the kind of story that makes you go crazy cause you're on the edge of your seat til the next update...so don't make us go crazy...update soon!!!
Reviewer: Rosa
Anonymous
Date: 11/08/04 - 08:46PM
Title: My Happy Ending
Omg!..ok that was great. U have to update very soon..ok?.great job.
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