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Reviewer: mrstimberlake18
Anonymous
Date: 01/17/09 - 10:50AM
Title: Chapter 5
please continue?
Reviewer: lola
Anonymous
Date: 07/17/04 - 09:06PM
Title: Chapter 5
nifty story. I love how its going. Please update soon! hmm yes, wonderful. :)
Reviewer: ash
Signed
Date: 07/16/04 - 03:24AM
Title: Chapter 5
YAY! An update! I've been waiting forever! That was a very good chapter. i can't wait to read more. Please update again soon! i really like this story. Take care. ciao.
Reviewer: Laura
Anonymous
Date: 06/26/04 - 06:22AM
Title: Prologue
This is good but your tenses and grammar are wrong in a few places. Little things like that can really ruin a good story.
Author's Response: I'm English, could it just be that I'm writing in English not US English? If not, please be more specific and I'll look into them.
Reviewer: ash
Signed
Date: 06/11/04 - 08:25PM
Title: Chapter 4
That's a good chapter. It sort of explains things a bit more. and geez! does Justin have a temper or what?!? jk. well keep up the good work and i can't wait to read more.
Reviewer: ash
Signed
Date: 06/04/04 - 07:29PM
Title: Prologue
This is a very good story. it's also original too. it also appears that you are a very good writer too. Can't wait to read more and hope that you update sometime soon.
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