Reviewer: NIkki G.
Anonymous
Date: 08/22/05 - 03:31PM
Title: Time
Cool. Update soon and thanks. J&B!
Author's Response: So I have to ask you - what does J&B mean? *lol*
Reviewer: Teeny
Anonymous
Date: 08/22/05 - 01:14PM
Title: Time
In this story, I can take the moral high ground and see both girls' points of view....*is irritatingly smug for a moment* Anyway, I think that Chastity has been entirely unforgiving with Lauren. Of course Lauren shouldn't have done what she did, but to me, it felt like she was in the whole pickle so fast she didn't even realize what was going on. Chastity should have just taken a step back and not gotten so involved, because now she's caught up in the whole shebang too. BUT I feel sorry for her because I think her and Justin are wonderful together (for heaven's sake Chastity IS the female Justin) and I would hate for them to break up. I'm expecting fireworks and tension and s'more fireworks...but as long as I'm promised a happy ending with Justin with Chastity, Lauren with Chris, and everyone happy as a lark, okee dokee? Great :)
Author's Response: Okay, you're going to have no way of knowing what I'm on about but I'm very cross with you because you have totally inadvertently used one of my planned lines, biatch!!!! Anyway, you keep on being irritatingly smug my dear, I'm glad you can be so impartial because right now even I wanna go slap both of them *lol*
Reviewer: Kenz
Anonymous
Date: 08/22/05 - 01:10PM
Title: Time
Wow, go Cole! I think Chastity really needed a dose of reality, I hope she takes it on board and realises she isn't a saint. I'm still not a Lauren fan, though, and I will not be swayed!
More soon please :0)
Author's Response: Well, ya know, we could all do with a dose of reality sometimes - I just prefer living in cloud cuckoo land ;o)
Reviewer: Megan
Anonymous
Date: 08/18/05 - 07:03PM
Title: Reaping What You Sowed
As explosive as that was i was expecting much worse. Poor Trace tho (sends cyber ice). I hope Justin and Chris can work everything out.
Author's Response: Cyber ice... *LMAO*
Reviewer: Megan
Anonymous
Date: 08/18/05 - 06:28PM
Title: Settling
I'm SOOOOOO glad i found this story again.....i finally found time to search for it after NSMB mysteriously disappeared. I've really missed it you're awsome
Author's Response: I'm just so flattered you went looking, thank you :o)
Reviewer: Allyson
Anonymous
Date: 08/16/05 - 09:20PM
Title: Reaping What You Sowed
Okay, I know I must be the ONLY reader to think so, but even though I hate Lauren right now, I feel a teeny tiny bit of sympathy for her too. Even though it took her ENTIRELY too long to make a decision that if she hadn't been a dumbass she never would have had to make in the first place, she chose Chris for the right reasons. But that's just my thought on the matter and I'm gonna run away before anyone throws rotten fruit at me.
Author's Response: No, no rotten fruit! Pretty much everybody in the entire story has done some stupid shit (with perhaps the exception of the long suffering and currently bruised Trace) so they're all on even ground in that respect! Thanks for the review, hon :o)
Reviewer: Nikki G.
Anonymous
Date: 08/16/05 - 09:04PM
Title: Reaping What You Sowed
She deserved that and worst cause she might have possibly ruined their friendship and I hope not. I feel so bad for Chris, but hey he deserves someone better. Update soon and thanks. J&B!
Author's Response: I thought Chris was quite restrained, myself, I probably would have been throwing all sorts of four letter names around!
Reviewer: joone
Anonymous
Date: 08/16/05 - 08:49PM
Title: Reaping What You Sowed
thank god its over. the chapter title speaks for itself. man, i feel for chris and now i want to give him more hugs ... great chapter as usual
Author's Response: Chris is certainly in need of as many hugs as he can get right now - though he's probably too manly to admit it ;o)
Reviewer: Allyson
Anonymous
Date: 08/11/05 - 06:00PM
Title: Don't Hold Back
Hmm.... can't say I completely blame Chris for the jealousy as his initial reaction. I mean, Justin stands there and completely dogs him (not that he knew who he was calling a loser) and his girlfriend..... add that to other emotions that Chris has been having in regards to Justin and the group and you have a wonderful bit of reading. I'm sure at some point, he will calm down enough to realize that it isn't Justin's fault, but until then Chris is bound to take out his anger on him because this is that metaphorical straw on the camel's back. (Then again, as always I'm a tad baised towards the man beating the crap out of 'FroBoy.)
So wonderful author.... more, more, more, more, more...... and did I mention that I want to read some more. You know, if you ever need anyone to proofread the story (AKA get to read the wonderfulness before everyone else) I'm sure I know someone who would be willing to volunteer.
Author's Response: FroBoy? *LMAO* Ahh classic!!! Anyway, I'm so glad you said of that because that was exactly what I was trying to get at with the writing... well, not the bias against FroBoy but the rest of it anyway *lol* Thanks for the review hon! :o)
Reviewer: tanya
Anonymous
Date: 08/10/05 - 11:56PM
Title: Don't Hold Back
holly shit!!!!!
oh no!!! you so better not wait a million years to update again cause im dying here, shit has literally hit the fan!
oh god! loved it!
Author's Response: It wasn;t a million years, it was only a month!!! Okay, the month really doesn;t sound much better does it? *lol*
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