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Reviewer: joone
Anonymous
Date: 08/10/05 - 09:18PM
Title: Don't Hold Back
oh my crap! but ... im really glad that chris finally knows. i hope he dumps lauren ... seriously. i also hope he gets it that it aint justin's fault ... the girl played them....
can i give chris a hug?
Author's Response: I think Chris could use a hug, the author's really mean to him... but I haven;t yet worked out how to hug fictional characters so if you do then let me know!!
Reviewer: Nikki G.
Anonymous
Date: 08/10/05 - 08:56PM
Title: Don't Hold Back
Okay I read the last chapter and just knew I had to go back and read the whole story. All I gotta say is that I hope that Lauren gets her ass kicked and that Chris gets over his jealousy of J. I really hope Chris doesn't let a girl ruin their friendship...he better not. Update soon and thanks. J&B!
Author's Response: Come to think of it, I think that last chapter managed to sum up the entire back story, you probably didn't even need to read the previous 32!!! *lol* Hold up, wait... are you telling me you read the whole thing in one sitting? Yowsers!!! Anyway, thanks for the review hon :o)
Reviewer: Tasha
Anonymous
Date: 08/10/05 - 05:59PM
Title: Don't Hold Back
THE SHIT HAS HIT THE FAN. chris need to get his shit together it's not justin fault how things have been going and the way people are thinking . he had no right to throw puches except for at lauren but i don't like men hitting women so that's out lol. I hope the both of them rip her a new one verbally
Author's Response: Ahhh... don't be too hard on Chris, he's just in shock and it really struck an already sore spot :o) But yes, no hitting Lauren - apart from anything else she's pretty scrappy, she'd hit back *lol*
Reviewer: Allyson
Anonymous
Date: 07/13/05 - 06:21PM
Title: Settling
Looks like I've been watching the wrong website for story updates. I've been keeping an eye on your regular page and not seeing much and then I come here and there's a secret mystery chapter! And what a chapter it was! I was biting my nails thinking that Justin was going to tell Charity that their fight for really personal and one of them said Lauren's name. Phew! So glad he didn't but at the same time I want the s**t to hit the fan already because I know it's going to be filled with fireworks.
Since it's CFTC weekend and all..... I vote for a new chapter with some extra Kirkpatrick lovin' in it. (But I'm just biased)
Author's Response: Well who could blame you for wanting a lil extra Kirkpatrick? *lol*
Reviewer: joone
Anonymous
Date: 07/03/05 - 06:16PM
Title: Complicated
i know what? i dont like lauren anymore. i dont want her ending up with chris ... coz ... she's gonna end up hurting my boy ... =)
Reviewer: isela
Anonymous
Date: 06/25/05 - 10:15PM
Title: Allow Me To Introduce Myself
i love this story, but i started out really hating chastity and now she's getting all the good stuff. i'm not really sure who i should like now. end my misery and let me know if chastity or lauren ends up with justin!
Author's Response: I wish I could, but that'd spoil all the fun! *lol*
Reviewer: joone
Anonymous
Date: 06/20/05 - 10:57AM
Title: Danger Zone
ooooohhhhhh!
Reviewer: joone
Anonymous
Date: 06/15/05 - 12:00PM
Title: Gauntlet
what justin said about jc? man ... that was great. i feel the same way ... why dont people get jc? why?
Author's Response: I put it down to people not knowing pure talented sex god-ness when they see it *lol*
Reviewer: Amber - Jrtluva05
Anonymous
Date: 06/13/05 - 10:42AM
Title: Gauntlet
wow, awesome job hun, can't wait for more!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: joone
Anonymous
Date: 06/11/05 - 06:53AM
Title: Loose Thread
ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh .... man! the suspense is killing me here!
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