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Reviewer: Danyelle
Anonymous
Date: 07/08/04 - 08:53AM
Title: Chapter Four
I love this story now that its getting more in detail and we actually know the characteristics of the characters. Great update can't wait for more!
Reviewer: Kween
Anonymous
Date: 07/08/04 - 07:41AM
Title: Chapter Four
This chapter was kind of funny.
Reviewer: Diana
Anonymous
Date: 07/07/04 - 06:43PM
Title: Chapter Four
ahh loving the update.
Reviewer: Christine
Anonymous
Date: 07/07/04 - 05:52PM
Title: Chapter Four
Cute.
Reviewer: Dreamer
Signed
Date: 07/07/04 - 04:17PM
Title: Chapter One Part B
he turned to her with sad eyes, "Mommy, I don't wanna leave. I just got home." awwww he may be money hungry but still he's adorable.....lol
Reviewer: Dreamer
Signed
Date: 07/07/04 - 04:11PM
Title: Chapter One Part A
I like it but justin's a little greedy? 7 figures? lol
Reviewer: nsyncs1girl
Signed
Date: 07/01/04 - 12:34PM
Title: Chapter Three
I love this story so much. I definitely wouldn't have thought of it. Glad I cought it in the beginning. It's easier for me to read long stories if they come at me as they're being developed, you know what I mean? Anyway, I can't wait for chapter 5. I love it so much. Write more soon!
Reviewer: Kween
Anonymous
Date: 07/01/04 - 06:22AM
Title: Chapter Three
I love this story give me more!!
Reviewer: unknown
Anonymous
Date: 06/30/04 - 11:23PM
Title: Chapter Three
is the setting somewhere in the bay area? i was just wondering.
Author's Response: Hey, yes the setting is in the Bay Area. I didn't want to write about Castro Valley again, so I changed the name of it, but it's set in the same place. Right next door to Hayward, a few minutes from Dublin/Pleasanton and all that fun stuff. East Bay Area basically :)
Reviewer: Diana
Anonymous
Date: 06/30/04 - 10:26PM
Title: Chapter Three
im liking this story, you caught my eye. and i love how its LONG chapters. keep it up!
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