Reviewer: amy
Anonymous
Date: 06/01/04 - 08:15PM
Title: Part 2
i loved this story. :clap: amazing job!
Reviewer: aisha
Anonymous
Date: 05/31/04 - 11:22PM
Title: Part 2
very interesting, i must say. i loved the point of views and the way we were able to see that laura wasn't as invincible as justin made it seem lol. i only wish it were longer, but great job
Reviewer: aimee
Anonymous
Date: 05/30/04 - 08:48AM
Title: Part 2
that was good girl
Reviewer: Victoria
Anonymous
Date: 05/29/04 - 10:35PM
Title: Part 2
Beautiful!
Reviewer: aisha
Anonymous
Date: 05/29/04 - 07:37PM
Title: Part 1
great work as always! more more more!
Reviewer: Raven
Anonymous
Date: 05/29/04 - 10:15AM
Title: Part 1
I'm loving this. I can't wait to see what happens. I was kinda surprised when he all of a sudden says he loves Cameron. I'm like WHOA lol. I guess I just don't see their relationship like that, but it's a nice little twist and I love the point of view. Great work.
Reviewer: aimee
Anonymous
Date: 05/29/04 - 12:47AM
Title: Part 1
awesome work, cant wait to see what happens
Reviewer: Gigi
Anonymous
Date: 05/28/04 - 09:58PM
Title: Part 1
That was hot!
Reviewer: Angel
Anonymous
Date: 05/28/04 - 09:55PM
Title: Part 1
that was great. i can't wait to see how this pans out. laura sounds... well she scares me LOL
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