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Reviewer: nini
Anonymous
Date: 08/04/04 - 07:01PM
Title: The return
Yeah then we are not too far away from each other i'm right up greenfield off 11mile
Reviewer: nini
Anonymous
Date: 08/04/04 - 03:03AM
Title: The return
I see it like this people get killed everywhere it's just that they want too make us look so bad. people just don't think, it gets hot people get crazy lol
I love detroit but i'm glad that i'm in southfield because it's more peaceful that doesn't mean I don't love too go back too detroit thats where all my people are
Author's Response: Yeah I know what you mean, they're really making this town look bad when in most cases its not really that bad but you know how some idiots are. Southfield is real serene. I live up 8 mile across from Southfield so its pretty peaceful around these parts but I think of it like this, living here is like a love/hate thing. You absolutely hate it sometimes and then other times you love being here.
Reviewer: nini
Anonymous
Date: 08/04/04 - 02:52AM
Title: The return
girl I know it was alot of people going crazy on 4th of july people getting shot over a peice of chicken (I need too stop) Why am I up so late? lol
yahoo me if you can nita7232002
Author's Response: girl I know, now that right there was just ridiculous, over chicken? crazy and all that stuff just kept happening close by. The people that got killed on Martin was the street I used to live on and the lady that got stabbed on Evergreen is right up the street, I'm like man maybe I need to leave here,lol. Whenever I'm on yahoo I'll send you a message.
Reviewer: nini
Anonymous
Date: 08/04/04 - 01:03AM
Title: The return
I was just about too ask did you catch a bullet girl lol the shit ain't funny but it's still the fact that it happened. To think I wanted too go but I was stuck at home. Are you going too see usher?
Author's Response: lol girl I know, I didn't even know anything was going on since everyone screaming 'Detroit basketball' when I got home and my fam told I was like say what? All this shooting stuff is geting out of hand, like my cousin was one of the people that got killed on the 4th of July, crazy huh? Man I want to go to the Usher concert but it would be up at the damn Palace, I wish it was at the Joe but oh well. I don't think I'm gonna go. I wish I could so I could kidnap him and have all his babies,lol.
Reviewer: nini
Anonymous
Date: 08/01/04 - 08:02PM
Title: The Aftermath
I just read the sequel AMAZING
ok so did you go to the pardade?
did you go to the fireworks lol
Author's Response: thanks! yup went to the parade and had a hella fun time and to the fireworks but I was at blast on the river on Cobo to see JC(who is even hotter in person) only to find out that mess down at hart plaza happened. Crazy huh?
Reviewer: Rosa
Anonymous
Date: 07/04/04 - 08:55PM
Title: The Aftermath
I didn't know u had written a sequel until today. I have just spent, god knows how many hours reading this and I loved it. U did a very good job!!
Reviewer: Sari
Anonymous
Date: 06/28/04 - 12:50PM
Title: The Aftermath
That wasn't the ending i had in mind, but i 'm glad that Milana and Justin ended up together in the end.
Reviewer: Gigi
Anonymous
Date: 06/27/04 - 03:06AM
Title: The Aftermath
I also love the ending. Happy endings are always good.
Reviewer: Kween
Anonymous
Date: 06/27/04 - 02:45AM
Title: The Aftermath
I love happy endings and thanks for writing this story.
Reviewer: Kween
Anonymous
Date: 06/27/04 - 02:28AM
Title: The verdict
Vincent is going down man!!!!!
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