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Reviewer: Diana
Anonymous
Date: 06/24/04 - 02:13AM
Title: Chapter 20: When Two Becomes One
wow i absolutely loved it. when i first saw this story posted, i was a little hesitant about it.. i dont know why.. but i tonight, i was like.. ehh what the heck, and girl it's 3:11 am and i you got me hooked into that story that i didnt want to wait til morning to finish it. great job hun and i cant wait to read more of your writings.
Author's Response: Thank you sooo much, I really appreciate you reading my story
Reviewer: Brittney
Anonymous
Date: 06/22/04 - 09:51PM
Title: Chapter 20: When Two Becomes One
That was the absolute best!! :o) :o) Maia and JT are so freakin cute together! and sexy! and affectionate! and just...wonderful! lol I'm so glad Charlie and Kendall got what they deserved. I'm also glad JT got over her past. Everything is going good for them now. Justin is so sweet too! *sigh* if only they existed in real life. lol You did a fantastic job on this story. You shoud def. right more!! Once again, fantastic job!! :o) :o)
Author's Response: You are the best, thanks and who knows there might be a sequal!
Reviewer: justinzgirlkb
Signed
Date: 06/19/04 - 11:15AM
Title: Pro Logue
wow....i'm completely into this story....i really like it....can't wait to see what happens.
Reviewer: Brittney
Anonymous
Date: 06/19/04 - 01:34AM
Title: Chapter 19: Stripped
Oh I'm so happy!! :o) You go Justin! You beat Willy down! That's what I'm talking about! Willy...ugh!! But poor Raven and Joc. I'm just glad that Joc is ok, even if she is beat up, but Rav...I hope she'll be ok. Maia is going to go crazy knowing that her friend was shot and is in the hospital. I'm so glad Caleb told Justin about what was going on. I guess players can be changed. lol I wish Maia would have, but at leastsomebody did and Justin is not mad anymore...or not as mad. lol And I'm so glad he fired Charlie. If Justin get's within arms reach of him I know he will beat him down to nothing. I hope Kendall, Willy, and Charlie all get arrested for this stuff. Update soon!! I'm not ready for it to end yet! :o) :o)
Reviewer: Vikki
Signed
Date: 06/18/04 - 10:26AM
Title: Chapter 19: Stripped
YaY! I'm so proud of JC & Justin! :) I've been waiting 19 chapters for this... lol! I feel bad for Jocelyn though... maybe the guys can hook her up with Chris? He's the last single one right? lol! Anyways, wow... when JC charged at Kendall! And when Justin came back and socked Willy! I'm so happy Caleb was there to explain things to him, he's a great guy and I'm happy you kept him in the story and as a friend to Maia. Eeeeee! I'm so happy! :) More soon?
Reviewer: Audrey
Anonymous
Date: 06/18/04 - 12:34AM
Title: Chapter 18: The Last Dance
Fix this please. Oh I'm so angry he found out who she was. She should have told him when she had the chance tho. Make everyone happy again. Please. Stressing out over here. lol Update soon!
Reviewer: Brittney
Anonymous
Date: 06/17/04 - 11:20PM
Title: Chapter 18: The Last Dance
I'm so mad right now. At Willy, Kendall, Charlie, and Maia! I'm just so mad!! ugh! If I wrote down everything that I'm thinking right now it would take forever. But I'll be short...Willy: for being the slimy, sleezy, perverted old man he is and hurting Maia. Kendall- for being so crazy and abusive and helping Charlie hurt Maia and hurting Joc. Charlie- what he is doing is so wrong on so many levels. He needs to mind his business. He's taken his position and went way to far with it. He thinks that he made Justin who he is so Justin has to follow his rules, and date who he wants him to date, and he's willing to kill off Maia for it to happen. He. Is. Sick. Maia- cause she's lying to Justin. Plain and simple. She's lying and for that I'm so mad at her. Yeah, I don't want her to get killed or even have to go through what she's going through, but it's her fault. She's lied to JT since the beginning and that just makes me so so mad. Even if JT gets to NYC and helps her, he's still going to be mad cause she's lied to him since the day she met up with him again at the vid shoot. All these people piss me off. lol Update soon please!
Reviewer: Vikki
Signed
Date: 06/17/04 - 09:04PM
Title: Chapter 18: The Last Dance
*hugs Justin* ... the poor thing. Man, I was crying right along with him. I can't wait until Charlie get's his, and I hope Justin is the one that gives it to him! And Maia? I want to shake her! Doesn't she realize that if she told Justin and swallowed her fear that just maybe she wouldn't be in that "pre-dicky-ment" ... *sigh*. Great update :)
Reviewer: Vivian
Anonymous
Date: 06/17/04 - 06:26PM
Title: Chapter 17: Secrets Unfolded
ugh! what a bastard! I'm gonna kill Charlie....who's with me??!
Reviewer: lila
Anonymous
Date: 06/16/04 - 03:18AM
Title: Chapter 16: When It All Falls Down
WOW! I really liked this chapter! thats was the best kissing scene ever!
Author's Response: thanks!.....i got chills myself writing it..lol.
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