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Reviewer: amk16
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Date: 08/17/05 - 10:23AM
Title: Prologue
To be totally honest, I read the prologue and I was like wtf? Then I read it again and I realized that if you don't think about it so much, it makes sense. It's really interesting and I like your style of writing. Some authours want you to think the entire time, but with your writing, it just flows. I don't know how else to describe it. I really like it though and I can't wait to read the rest.
Reviewer: Vivian
Anonymous
Date: 06/13/04 - 11:55PM
Title: Chapter Six Part One
ok, not a big Buffy fan. Is this Xander suppose to look like the one from the show? If not... some physical details would be nice - he's just a blank shadow right now. But besides that, great chapter! cant wait for part two =)
Reviewer: Mariah111384
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Date: 06/12/04 - 10:17PM
Title: Prologue
I agree. This Xander guy is gonna be trouble for Ebony. Can't wait for the next installment. Brava. Update girl. :)
Reviewer: justinzgirlkb
Anonymous
Date: 06/12/04 - 09:25PM
Title: Chapter Six Part One
wow-- i really really really like this story...i've been much into the supernatural/fantasy vampire type thing, but i LOVE this story....can't wait to see where you go with it. hope that [stupid] xander kid doesn't get much in the way.... ;) (oh xander...lol, flashback of BTVS!) ...can't wait for more!~
Reviewer: Vikki
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Date: 06/12/04 - 12:35PM
Title: Chapter Five
oh wow, I can't even explain what that emotional roller coaster did to me. This story is gonna be the end of me, lol! I love the conflict of the story, it gives the plot depth and keeps me wanting more and more and more.
Reviewer: Mariah111384
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Date: 06/11/04 - 09:42PM
Title: Chapter Five
I actually really cried there. I hope she tells him who she is. I hope he doesn't freak out. They need each other. They need comfort. You can tell she feels serene around him. He brings her peace and breaths life into her dead body. It's love. They're in love. Again, the words and images take my breath away. Truly beautiful. Another hit! :)
Reviewer: Mariah111384
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Date: 06/11/04 - 09:36PM
Title: Chapter Four
"Ebony melted into him, her fingers falling over the ridges and valleys of his body covered by his thin clothing. His question still confused her, but she pushed it to the back of her mind as she kissed Justin back, wishing for time to cease and the world to stop." Truly wow! Can't say enough good about this amazing chapter. I'm so excited in reading this. You have such a talent.
Author's Response: Trust me...if only my real life could be as mysterious and utterly romantic as my stories. -lol- My talent...as you say...only comes from what I really desire most out of life; love, romance, mystery and happiness. So, in turn I write it all out. If that's talent...then hey go me!! -lol-
Thank you again for your kind words. :)
Reviewer: Ready2Fall4Joey
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Date: 06/11/04 - 06:18PM
Title: Chapter Three
wow, you have such a way with words. I'm so addicted right now, the story has just the right mixture of thrill and sexiness - can NOT wait for the next update, hurry! :)
Reviewer: Vivian
Anonymous
Date: 06/11/04 - 05:46PM
Title: Prologue
yes! I love vamp!sync stories, especially Justin ones =) ... I'm lovin' it, update again soon!
Reviewer: Mariah111384
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Date: 06/11/04 - 04:16PM
Title: Chapter Three
Aw! Run Forrest run! He found her. Ya just had to leave it at that did ya? :) Methinks Justin is in wub in Ebony. I love these stories where the love is forbidden especially vamps. I'm a huge Buffy fan. Are you? Cool man. Tony tha Tiger commends tha chapter, Grrrrr8! :) Update soon. ;)
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