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Reviewer: Teeny
Signed
Date: 02/02/05 - 02:55PM
Title: Chapter 1
Wow, I just read both stories one after the other (because I'm that cool...lol) and I really, really enjoyed them. I've gotten so immersed in their relationship in the past 30 minutes it would be a shame to stop now so please update!! lol I know that's an irritating phrase and should only be said when you're extremely addicted to a story, but I feel the need to use it around ya all the time hun!! (That's my weird way of saying you are brilliant lol)
Reviewer: Victoria
Anonymous
Date: 07/18/04 - 06:13AM
Title: Chapter 4
Cute story
Reviewer: Serena
Anonymous
Date: 07/14/04 - 03:19PM
Title: Chapter 4
I like this story. It's cute. I wanna find out what happened to her soon!
Reviewer: Jessica
Anonymous
Date: 07/14/04 - 03:15PM
Title: Chapter 4
I love this story. What's wrong with her? Give me more story soon!
Reviewer: Arianna
Anonymous
Date: 07/14/04 - 03:14PM
Title: Chapter 4
I'm enjoying this one. :) Update when you get a chance! :)
Reviewer: Jenny
Anonymous
Date: 07/14/04 - 03:12PM
Title: Chapter 4
Grammar's not a huge thing for me. ;) I love the story. I like what you're doing with it. When are we gonna find out what's wrong with Lana? Update soon!
Reviewer: KoKo
Anonymous
Date: 07/14/04 - 01:24PM
Title: Chapter 4
You might want to pay a little more attention to grammar but it's good.
Author's Response: What specifically? Elaborate please so I can learn from you and improve. What's good about it? Just curious....
Reviewer: Kristina
Anonymous
Date: 07/12/04 - 02:35AM
Title: Chapter 1
Whoa Melana is starting to sound like Storm from X-Men with those eyes. Glad to see another chapter, can't wait to find out what's going on with her and if Justin will ever win her heart completely.
Reviewer: Gigi
Anonymous
Date: 07/11/04 - 03:35AM
Title: Chapter 4
When are we going to find out what going on with Melana?
Reviewer: Kween
Anonymous
Date: 07/11/04 - 02:43AM
Title: Chapter 4
This chapter is great update soon.
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