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Reviewer: Ashlie
Anonymous
Date: 06/28/05 - 10:13PM
Title: An Unknown Desire
Awesome chapter! Looks like you havent updated for awhile. Hope you update soon! You can't leave me hanging like that. lol
Reviewer: Madcrazychick
Signed
Date: 07/28/04 - 05:45PM
Title: An Unknown Desire
Engaged and cheating. Tsk. Tsk. Tsk. :)
Reviewer: Dreamer
Signed
Date: 07/24/04 - 08:14PM
Title: An Unknown Desire
Loved it loved it loved.....and it's a bout bloody time...how long does a girl stall before jumping in bed with Justin...i know it wouldn't take me long at all...lol
Reviewer: Brittney
Anonymous
Date: 07/23/04 - 11:39PM
Title: An Unknown Desire
Now I don't condone cheating, but dang girl! I would've did it too! lol that was a wonderful chapter! hot! lol I can't wait to see what happens next. John is just helping her to solidify the fact that she wants Justin by not being there or stuff happening like what happened. but hey...Justin or John? Not too hard. lol Update soon!! :o) :o)
Reviewer: Madcrazychick
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Date: 07/11/04 - 03:36PM
Title: Sally's Seal of Approval
How did Marcy get there so fast? I thought Ally was still on the phone with her and then the next thing I know she's in there yelling with pepper spray. Who knows, maybe I wasn't paying enough attention.
Anyways, I liked it. I like where I think it's going.
So update soon why don't ya?
Reviewer: Madcrazychick
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Date: 07/11/04 - 03:26PM
Title: Boxers or Towel?
I agree with Dreamer.
And damn, girl, this is getting really good. Wouldn't that be messed up though if she cheats on him with Justin only to find out that he hasn't been cheating on her at all? Hmmm...sorry, thinking ahead. I do that from time to time. :)
Reviewer: Madcrazychick
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Date: 07/11/04 - 03:17PM
Title: The Act
Even though I'm only on chapter two...I love this story so far. I love Justin's character. Nice to see a believeable first encounter...and different from the others. I'm interested in seeing where this goes...
And hopefully you keep up the good work. :)
Reviewer: Dreamer
Signed
Date: 07/09/04 - 08:39PM
Title: Sally's Seal of Approval
i liked sally, she's cute....lol
Reviewer: Dreamer
Signed
Date: 07/09/04 - 08:34PM
Title: Boxers or Towel?
Towel, definitely prefer him in a towel...it just comes off so much easier
Reviewer: Dreamer
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Date: 07/09/04 - 08:30PM
Title: The Act
i like it like :)
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