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Reviewer: Samantha
Anonymous
Date: 10/20/04 - 12:27AM
Title: Chapter 1
I luv ur story. For a first try it was very touching, and sentimental. Keep on writing.
Reviewer: anm
Anonymous
Date: 07/14/04 - 02:02AM
Title: Chapter 8
so i guess shes gonna be stupid now i dont think that bob would have had enough guts to fire her infront of JC cause that would cause problems... ya know... oh well. I hope Jacers finds her so that theres no problems and that freak stays away from her abuse is bad :)
Reviewer: anm
Anonymous
Date: 07/11/04 - 07:31AM
Title: Chapter 7
yay hes done being an idiot :)
Reviewer: anm
Anonymous
Date: 07/10/04 - 05:54PM
Title: Chapter 6
:) its really cute... one qustion i have always had for JC is why her? ahh i dont like bob.(bobbie) oh well! keep going
Author's Response: Thanks!..I don't like Bobbie either...I have always wondered why he went out with her myself...thanks for taking the time to read it! it means alot!
Reviewer: Jen
Anonymous
Date: 07/07/04 - 12:49AM
Title: Chapter 1
I like it! But could you fix the formating for the next chapter? Like break up the big paragraphs and put spaces when someone new starts talking? It'd make it easier to read! :)
Author's Response: Thanks for reading it!..yea I'm gonna fix the format, I'm not sure why it's like that but I'll fix it. Thanks again!
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