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Reviewer: Singleton27
Anonymous
Date: 06/16/06 - 03:46PM
Title: forever
Please !do another about how they got in this situation,and how lori became his slave.
Reviewer: Ashley
Anonymous
Date: 06/24/05 - 06:29PM
Title: forever
You are SO in need of making sequels to this vampire story. I'm in love with it and sad that it was only a short story :[
Reviewer: Kristina
Anonymous
Date: 07/08/04 - 05:22PM
Title: forever
So far so good, I really like what you have. I agree, I'd like to see how they got to that point or where it'll go afterwards. hope there's more:)
Reviewer: Raven
Signed
Date: 07/08/04 - 12:17PM
Title: forever
I liked it, but it seemed more like a capture/snippet if anything. It'd be interesting to see more of it though, maybe how they came into this situation? If you could make it into a long story, or a series of shorts? :)
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