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Reviewer: Danyelle
Anonymous
Date: 04/05/05 - 10:56PM
Title: 20
Aww adorable chapter. I absoutly love all the characters. Justin, Maddy and Rosa eekk they are just all so precious! Wahooo for soccer/football for sure! Best damn sport ever played. I'm kinda partial to it if you can't tell. Anway terrific job. You never sease to amaze me with your ability to write. Keep up the great job.
Reviewer: Gigi
Anonymous
Date: 04/05/05 - 09:10PM
Title: 20
Aww they were so cute in this chapter. And Justin getting all jealous over Lucas.
Reviewer: Gigi
Anonymous
Date: 03/21/05 - 05:31PM
Title: 19
Maddy is so adorable.
Reviewer: Danyelle
Anonymous
Date: 03/21/05 - 09:56AM
Title: 19
Justin and Maddy are like two peas in a pod. Its wonderful, the connection that they have together brings a huge smile to my face. You able to show so much through the two of them. I love it. And Justin and Rosa and that kiss steamy. Hahaha. I hope something happens between them. And Maddy asking Justin about it at the end priceless. Oo update soon, love the story.
Reviewer: Mattison30
Signed
Date: 03/20/05 - 09:15PM
Title: 19
Awe....very cute! So glad they kissed! Maddie is adorable. :) I love the interaction between Justin and both of the girls. Great job and update asap so I can find out what's going to happen after that kiss.
Reviewer: Danyelle
Anonymous
Date: 03/20/05 - 09:32AM
Title: 18
I haven't read this story in a while. So I'm back and completely blown away still. I love the story Wow Justin and Maddy together are adorable. I keep saying awww. I loved when she was trying to think of a nickname for him. To funny. Your such a great writer. Terrific job.
Reviewer: Ashlie
Anonymous
Date: 03/19/05 - 06:17PM
Title: 18
Wow, I really like this story. It's wicked good. Please update soon!!
Reviewer: whtny
Anonymous
Date: 03/17/05 - 10:44PM
Title: 18
We set up in a monthly payment of 400 dollars a month for the next four year."
I'll write it for 10 grand and you can consider the rest a donation to the hospital
-nit picky, the math in that is off.
post in my group? http://launch.groups.yahoo.com/group/nsync-FanFicCentral
Author's Response: omg thanks for noticing that, I actually changed the amount last minute because I'm wasn't too sure how much health care was in the States. But I'll fix that now. Thanks.
Reviewer: Rosa
Anonymous
Date: 12/23/04 - 04:18PM
Title: 16
Great job...I would love to see a confrontation between Jonathan and Justin...that would be great! lol...more soon!
Nice chapter, keep up the good work. I'm really liking this story.
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