Reviews For Deceit
Reviewer: Andie Pandie Signed Date: 07/29/04 - 01:01PM Title: Prologue

I thought he deserved everything he got but geez... people do make mistakes -laughs- I was gonna make this long review on how lance was doing the right thing even though he seemed like an ass b/c well you have to hear it from your friends..


Reviewer: Fionnuala Signed Date: 07/29/04 - 09:51AM Title: Prologue

Whoa, am I the only one who thinks Justin deserves everything he gets and Lance is right?

Author's Response: lol, yep it seems that way so far *shrugs*


Reviewer: Kween Anonymous Date: 07/29/04 - 08:46AM Title: Chapter Two

What is his wife doing now? And why is Lance acting like that?


Reviewer: Andie Pandie Signed Date: 07/28/04 - 10:33PM Title: Chapter Two

Great job girl! It's so sad though :( I know Justin did wrong but people can change lol... she has to go back to him.


Reviewer: Gigi Anonymous Date: 07/28/04 - 07:25PM Title: Chapter Two

Danyelle I'm with you on this.


Reviewer: Danyelle Anonymous Date: 07/28/04 - 12:35PM Title: Chapter Two

Damn........Lance. Yeah I mean I can see that Justin is VERY wrong but Lance is being a complete ass. He probably has a secret crush on J's wife. But whatever I dont like Lance in this at all!


Reviewer: Danyelle Anonymous Date: 07/28/04 - 08:50AM Title: Chapter One

I think it was Chris..something that Chris would do. But I could be wrong. Great story, love it!


Reviewer: Kween Anonymous Date: 07/28/04 - 01:41AM Title: Chapter One

I think he was fighting with Jc.


Reviewer: Gigi Anonymous Date: 07/27/04 - 11:22PM Title: Prologue

That was mean but I love your writing anyway.

Author's Response: :D


Reviewer: Gigi Anonymous Date: 07/27/04 - 06:23PM Title: Chapter One

I love this story. But which one of the was he fighting with?

Author's Response: He-he. Well I thought that I would leave that as a mystery for now. LOL. But you'll find out in the next chapter, which I am woking on right now. Thanks for the feedback everyone :D





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