Oh my god! This story is really really good. You almost made me cry. ALMOST! lol. You are a very good write and you capture the emotions very well. You started the story very well and continued to make eah new chapter a bit better than the last. I really hope to see an update sometime soon. Take care. Ciao.
~ash~
WOW...ummm, your going to make me cry. That was amazing! You truly know how to write a story and keep someone wanting more! Great job. Can't wait for an update!
I can see how they'd know they wouldnt make it but that was like she decided when she died lol. other than that, it's good so far, this is all I have time to read but I'll definitely be reading it. :)
