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Reviewer: jeannie
Signed
Date: 08/28/04 - 03:10PM
Title: Chapter 2: Alone
Fucking awesome. Write more like now lol. Justin sounds so sexy
Reviewer: Brandy
Anonymous
Date: 08/14/04 - 05:49PM
Title: Chapter 2: Alone
I really like! Justin as a bad boy, yep I'd jump him in a minute. Update soon please!
Reviewer: Emily
Anonymous
Date: 08/14/04 - 04:16AM
Title: Prolouge
the whole plot is good.but there is some weakness.like the girl gives in easily to Justin.and you don't pesonalazie Justin Character.you keep saying he is a bad guy it would be better if you make some actions for him to show he is really bad.
joey's character is not well known too.
beside the reader can't figure out whether the girl likes justin or not.
after all I do enjoy reading your story.but surely there is room for improvement.
Reviewer: themusicfan
Anonymous
Date: 08/11/04 - 10:16AM
Title: Chapter 2: Alone
Justin is sexy as a badboy.
update soon
Reviewer: Emma
Anonymous
Date: 08/11/04 - 10:05AM
Title: Chapter 2: Alone
Whoa now, Justin. hahaha
Reviewer: Kween
Anonymous
Date: 08/11/04 - 01:18AM
Title: Chapter 2: Alone
WOW!!!!!!!!!! Justin is really bad boy!!
Reviewer: Ashley
Anonymous
Date: 08/10/04 - 05:26PM
Title: Chapter 1: First impressions
I love high school stories and justin is great as a pusher on sex, please update soon.
Reviewer: Wh|tney
Anonymous
Date: 08/10/04 - 12:47AM
Title: Chapter 1: First impressions
whoa
post in my group? www.groups.yahoo.com/group/nsync-fanficentral
Author's Response: I would love to post the story in your group but when I went to the link that you gave me it said there was no group there by that name. Just e-mail me the link to your group and I will add it. My e-mail is unc_fanatic16@yahoo.com
Reviewer: Brittney
Anonymous
Date: 08/10/04 - 12:13AM
Title: Chapter 1: First impressions
The first thing that came out of my mouth when I read the last of this chapter was, "oh my." lo I love Justin as a bad boy! Sexy huh? lol l Update soon! :o)
Reviewer: tiffany
Anonymous
Date: 08/09/04 - 07:30PM
Title: Chapter 1: First impressions
that was great can't wait to see what happens next
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