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Reviewer: classicbeauty
Signed
Date: 09/21/06 - 12:17PM
Title: Chapter 1
awesome but when are you going to add some more? dani
Reviewer: Liz
Anonymous
Date: 03/13/06 - 02:17AM
Title: Chapter 4
Damn that was wrong... and so f**ked up.
Reviewer: matthews baby
Signed
Date: 03/13/06 - 12:21AM
Title: Chapter 1
I seriously like this story and where it's going the only thing i'd suggest would be you're tenses. in the beginning you stared out in present saying things like "she takes..." and "she says..." then you changed it to past with "she ran..." ya see? fix that and you'll be good to go chica!
Reviewer: Timberlake
Signed
Date: 03/12/06 - 07:13PM
Title: Chapter 6
Oh, YAY! I love this story! I see a friendship developing! Mrs. Harless needs to eat. I hate to see her sick. =/
Reviewer: ash
Signed
Date: 08/26/04 - 10:16PM
Title: Chapter 5
Awesome twists! I didn't see any of that coming. Great work and hope to see another update sometime soon.
~ash~
Reviewer: Ava
Anonymous
Date: 08/26/04 - 01:44AM
Title: Chapter 5
Wow, I can honestly say I didn't see those twists coming. Awesome job keep the updates coming please!
Reviewer: wicca
Signed
Date: 08/25/04 - 11:43PM
Title: Chapter 5
getting intresting.poor lynn.update
Reviewer: Marianne
Anonymous
Date: 08/25/04 - 06:18PM
Title: Chapter 5
Please update, I really like this story. Mr. Harless is such a jerk, the bastard.
Reviewer: Marianne
Anonymous
Date: 08/25/04 - 06:07PM
Title: Chapter 3
Mr. Timberlake's a tad bit jealous.
Reviewer: Emma
Anonymous
Date: 08/25/04 - 08:26AM
Title: Chapter 2
I love the 'historical-ish' writting. haha i think its a great idea. keep up the good work
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