Reviewer: Ava Anonymous Date: 08/24/04 - 02:53PM Title: Chapter 1

Great start! I liked Justin's interaction with Kayla at the end. I'm hooked now so keep the updates comin' girl!


Reviewer: Marianne Anonymous Date: 08/24/04 - 01:57PM Title: Chapter 2

I like this story. It's a very interesting setting and is very orginal. Your an excellent writer. I hope you update soon.


Reviewer: wicca Anonymous Date: 08/24/04 - 01:21PM Title: Chapter 2

wow thats nice. I like it. no one treats her right and Justin likes her.............gonna be intresting


Reviewer: ash Signed Date: 08/24/04 - 01:20PM Title: Chapter 2

Very good start for a story. you're setting it up very nicely. Good work and hope to see an update soon. Take care and good luck with the rest of the story. Ciao. ~ash~





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