you've got to come and post to this, i don't think i'm patient enough to wait to read this. i would have knocked the crap out of angela by now if she really thinks she can take my brother from me. i'd just get on her case and the other five assholes for not noticing the bullshit she's on. just thinkin bout it makes me mad even though it never happen cuz i don't talk to my brothers like that. i'd never thought i'd say this about a story or about justin at least but he is really pissing me off and i wouldn't want to be related to him if i wasn't black or i just happened to be adopted by his family. i'd rather die.

Author's Response: I guess that's what I was going for... lol. thanks for the review, and look for another chapter soon. glad you're enjoying it... i mean, aside from justin. :)

Angela sucks for the fifth chapter in a row lol, she needs to go away like Dee said. Boo her! And Justin needs to see the light and leave her. Great chapter!

I like the story concept. It's definitely different, not something you read about on every fansite. At first I thought, that's normal sibling rivalry, but then I realized how much they really can't stand each other. It's non-stop screaming in that house- how can they stand it? I hope they can at least have a civil conversation sometime soon before one of them does something stupid that could really effect them.

Author's Response: Definitely. It goes way deeper than regular sibling rivalry. But it's fun writing the argument scenes because of some of the funny insults. :)

i love this story..update soon!

I'm glad they opened up to each other, sounded like they had a lot to get off their chests. I still don't like Angela though, I have to admit. Great update!