Reviewer: Helena
Anonymous
Date: 03/28/05 - 04:39AM
Title: Chapter 6
I love this story, very very interesting perspective. I wonder who Angela is and what relations she had with him before. Very intruiging I must say
Author's Response: I wasn't really sure what I was going to do with her, but reading your feedback gave me an idea. A very specific interesting idea just popped into my head. I'm definitely gonna use it in the story, see... feedback can help write a story, Thanks Helena... :)
Reviewer: jrtluva05
Signed
Date: 03/27/05 - 11:29PM
Title: Chapter 6
okay, update soon please! that was really good, i really felt Laney's emotions! god i got teary eyed! wow! lol well update soon!
Author's Response: I know! Wierd thing is, I read my chapter back quickly, and I had to stop and read the thought part because it was just so important in the story, and I was like- wow... this is pretty depressing. Lol... :)
Reviewer: Lindsey
Anonymous
Date: 03/27/05 - 07:06PM
Title: Chapter 6
I love this chapter it is so suspensful. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response: Well I can tell you, the more chapters, the more suspenseful it's gonna get! :) Honestly...
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