Aww, I wanted to cry!! That was so sad. But it wouldn't be Justin Timberlickable's life, if drama didn't happen. So, I know it's somewhere, lurking in your mind to just pop out. This was a great chapter. Definitely don't trust Danyelle. Like, okay, she knows that's their last night together you just don't "cut in". I don't care how friendly it is. She wouldn't want none of my kung fu grip. lolol, But I loved it! Great as usual, Ms. Timberlake.
Author's Response: Justin Timberlickable's? KUNG FU GRIP? LMAO! You are too funny, I swear! LOL! Yes, the drama's on its way. When and where it will strike has yet to be determined. Thanks so much for the review sugar. I'll update ASAP!
ohhhh my god i felt like i was in the terminal with them. that was soooo sweet and so sad at the same time. i swear if danyelle gets bold, it's me and her. hmph. anyways great as usual especially the part where trace wanted to break her legs, harsh but funny. can't wait for the next chapter. love ya!
Author's Response: LOL! I might add a street fight, just for you girl! LOL! Thanks so much for the review, sugar. It's always a pleasure.
I'm finally reading this story. I'm proud I am. I just have to say this story is so powerful already. I really love it and I just had to say something before I continue. Thanks for reviewing my story too! :D *goes back to reading*
Author's Response: LOL! Hi Mariah! I'm glad you're reading my story and I'm even happier that you're enjoying it also. Keep reading girl! LOL!
Wow, I haven't read this chapter yet, must've missed it. But it's totally like a premonition. And premonitions like this aren't good. Like, he's obviously not gonna try to kill her and turn into her dad, lolol. But the whole cheating thing ..could happen! I'd feel self-concious too. Of course she could be reading too much into his actions because of the dream. OMG, I so need an update!
Author's Response: LOL! You are hilarious, man! LOL! I guarantee you that Justin WILL NOT turn into her pops anytime soon! LOL! I can't tell you what's going to happen, but hopefully the chapter will be up by Thursday. Maybe even today if I get the writing done. . .Okay, tomorrow. LOL! Thanks for the review, sugar.
Reviewer: AshleySignedDate: 01/25/05 - 09:06AM
Title: A Dream Come True
Girrrrl. Man, I knew that dream was a damn premonition. See, now I'm feelin' Lonnie on that 'What-The-Fuck' factor. Cuz Justin already has this 'I'm in-fuckin'-fatuated with this chick' kind of air about him, and it's scary. The two of them going away? On tour? For a long time? Yes, that's the shit that nightmares are made of. Poor Alonsha. Really, who in their right mind would trust that. True Love and Pop Stars on Tour just don't mesh well. Aww, don't make me sad with this situation, homeslice. Or I'll have to invade your story to kick some Timberass.
I also gotta tell you that I just love watching your writing progress with every chapter. You get amazingly better with every word, and I'm proud of you for doin' your thing, girl. Just keep up the awesome work. ;-)
Author's Response: Kick some Timberass???? Wow, lol. I know, the 'what the factor' is in full swing. Lonnie's insecurities might come with good reason. . .
Aw, you're so sweet Ashley. I'm flattered by your compliment. I don't even know what to say to that, lol. Just. . . Thank you!
Reviewer: AshleySignedDate: 01/25/05 - 08:48AM
Title: Dreaming of Diaster
Dude, what kinda fucked up realm is she in? Scary ass dreams and premonitions. Stop it, Alonsha! Seriously, that was freakin' freaky lol. It reminded me of Vanilla Sky. Haven't seen that movie in years, so I don't remember much of anything, but I do know that it was weird as all hell. And yeah, so was that dream. This must stop! It must stop now! They just need to get married and have lots of babies so Lonnie's fears of ... whatever she's fearing can be erased. She cannot function this way. Shoot, it's killin' me, so I just know that she ain't right in the head.
Author's Response: LMAO! I remember Vanilla Sky, that movie was weird. . . But anywho, everybody seems to have the marriage and baby solution. . .lol. It's cute, but I can't guarantee it will be used. She can't function this way, but we might find a solution to that ;-) Thanks for the review Ashley.
Reviewer: AshleySignedDate: 01/25/05 - 08:31AM
Title: Just Like My Shadow
Damn, lil' mama just can't ever get it right. But then, I get that way too sometimes, so I can't complain about her, huh? I'm just glad Lonnie stopped fakin' the funk with all that perfection shit. Ain't nobody perfect, girl! And life with someone perfect in it would suck, so don't do that anymore lol. I do wonder what's goin' on in that overactive imagination of hers. I still think it's that confidence thing. Even in being openly-honest with JT, it takes time to find that unwavering truth within yourself to really figure out what's wrong. But as The Mayer says, sometimes you get that thought that bums you out and then you forget what the thought was and you just end up bummed out for no damn reason at all lol. Damn Tuesdays. ;-)
This review barely even makes sense, but I don't care! Awesome job, homeslice. I've missed you! :-D
Author's Response: Aw, Ashley, my percious darling, lol. Wow, you're really into this, huh? LOL! You really get what's going on and I'm glad that you can relate to Lonnie and her "issues". It makes her more human. I appreciate the review, as usual. Missed you too! LOL!
Reviewer: nini22
AnonymousDate: 01/23/05 - 10:25PM
Title: A Dream Come True
You always seem to pull of amazing shockers. For some reason I knew that her dream about the seeing the brunette with justin would come true. Hopefully for lonnie the girl will be a lesbo lol
Author's Response: LMAO! Wow, that's one solution I never thought of, lol. I can't make any lesbian promises, but I will update, lol. Thanks nini for the review.
Reviewer: Michelle
AnonymousDate: 01/22/05 - 06:09PM
Title: A Dream Come True
I know the whole point of this entire chapter is to torture me. I had so many mixed emotions during this, it's not even right. LOL I don't like this Danyelle character already. I mean what the hell, Justin invited her on tour and it seems like he didn't even ask Alonsha. What's up with that?! It doesn't matter that she's busy! Okay, you know you have to update soon, please. Between you and Teeny, these updates are gonna kill me.
Author's Response: LOL! I hope I'm not causing you any physical harm! LOL! I'm sorry for driving you crazy Michelle. Danyelle's a back up dancer, she's on his tour. It's not her fault Justin's sexy as hell and will be around her a majority of the time, lol. You guys in here are so defensive! LOL! I'll update when I can. Thanks for the review!
