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Reviewer: Jordin
Anonymous
Date: 01/19/05 - 01:23PM
Title: Silver Lining
I feel kinda halfway guilty that it's taken me so long to get to this point and I'm still not even completely up to date. But hey, I like to pretend I have a life, so you can sue me if ya want. ;)
I just wanted to stop through here and let you know that I absotively, posilutely love this mothereffin' story. I love the way Justin and Alonsha's relationship has developed from perfect strangers to strangely perfect. I love his undying affection for her, despite her lack of size-sixness. I love her insecurities. They make her human. It's really a beautiful thing to witness. You've really done a great job progressing this story into a masterpiece and I vow that as soon as I get home from work today, I will completely catch up on everything. As long as you promise to keep the awesomeness coming.
Oh, and you have Ash to thank for another desperately devoted reader. :D Bravo, Timberlake.
Author's Response: Wow. Thank you. . . I'm like baffled by your review. I'm glad that you like Alonsha's personality. I was trying to make her as realistic as possible with ever flaw and insecurity. I send a thank you out to Ashley for sending me such a devoted reader. It's okay that you are catching up, it's better late than never! LOL! Thanks again, Jordin.
Reviewer: mourningnovember
Signed
Date: 01/19/05 - 11:17AM
Title: Dreaming of Diaster
*Smile* Since we've had conversation on a board about reviewing - I thought it was about time to give you props for your story. I haven't read all the way to this chapter, but I thought I would compliment you on a captivating story so far. I will keep on reading and commending you on your excellent writing ability. I love that you're writing in first person - I have tried on many accounts and I always end up deleting everything. I can't seem to nail it - but you have! The leading character is very in-depth and as I continue to read, it's so enjoyable to uncover different depths of her personality. Anyway. Now that I've written my very own novel in you're review box, lol, I'll shut up! Great job on the story, I'm positive that you will keep the good work going.
Author's Response: HEY! I'm so glad you reviewed. I'm soooo happy that you're enjoying my story so much. I'm cheesing like crazy here. Your review has made my day and I appreciate your compliments. It really means a lot to me that you are enjoying my writing style. Now that I have your author name, I'm going to be reading and reviewing for you also. Thanks so much again, I appreciate it.
Reviewer: Teeny
Anonymous
Date: 01/19/05 - 09:42AM
Title: Dreaming of Diaster
Woohoo!! First one to review this chapter!! (Inner geek, ignore her) I was laughing so hard during the first half of that chapter!! The great Justin Timberlake, afraid of...tampons? lol That was great. But then the laughter STOPPED when Alonsha had that dream!! What was that all about??!!! If he cheats on, write me into the story and I will personally kick his ass!! Great update, as usual!
Author's Response: LOL! I love the inner geek (Everybody has one). I'm so happy I got a review. I was like 'Damn, 60 people read it, but nobody reviewed!' lol. Yes, Justin's afraid of tampons, lol. What guy isn't? lol. If he cheats, I'll write you in, lol. Thanks for reading and reviewing Teeny, I'll update ASAP!
Reviewer: Teeny
Signed
Date: 01/16/05 - 03:06PM
Title: Just Like My Shadow
Well ya could've told me you'd updated!! lol I can't believe it took me two days to realize there was an unread chapter of Love and Trust out there... Anyway, enough of my weirdness, what is going on with Alonsha?? I'm glad her and Justin have this new "Don't keep secrets" thing, it should make things less complicated and speedily lead to a happy ending. But lemme guess, there's gonna be some drama before all that? lol Great update!!
Author's Response: LOL! Sorry for not telling you! I was like "I don't wanna come off as too pushy" lol. You know me so well, girl. Of course there's DRAMA! I gotta keep ya frustrated and guessing. Hopefully what I've got cooking will make ya beg for more. I'll update as soon as I can. Thanks for the review, sweet pea!
Reviewer: Gigi
Anonymous
Date: 01/15/05 - 06:45PM
Title: Just Like My Shadow
In my ipinion I think it has to do with her father.
Author's Response: Oh, sweet Gigi. Long time, no review. I missed all of my reviewers, my homeslices, so much! I'm glad to be back. So you're thinking daddy while everybody else is going for baby. . . hmm interesting. Thanks for the review.
Reviewer: UTCBeauty
Anonymous
Date: 01/15/05 - 06:35PM
Title: Just Like My Shadow
Welcome Backkkkkkkkkkkkk! welcome back, welcome back, welcome back!!!! yay! i kno shes wants a baby. shoooo i'd wanna baby with justin too. anyways i love that john mayer song hes sexy too. but good chapter, update soon!
Author's Response: LOL! HELLO!!!!! I missed you!!!! I feel so good now! Oh my goodness, everybody's thinking baby. .. . we'll have to see about that ;) I'm glad that the site's back. I'll update soon.
Reviewer: Michelle
Anonymous
Date: 01/15/05 - 04:54PM
Title: Just Like My Shadow
I know I was so happy when the site came back up. Update soon! I can't believe she is still wondering what she's missing. If I had Justin I wouldn't even think about what I was missing. I have the whole package right there! lol
Author's Response: LOL! Justin would be all I needed too, but the story would be boring if it ended like that! I need DRAMA girl! I thought you would've known that by now! LOL! It's great to be back. You will get a chapter soon. Thanks for reviewing Michelle.
Reviewer: Wh|tney
Anonymous
Date: 01/15/05 - 02:16PM
Title: Just Like My Shadow
baby envy? marriage?
Author's Response: LOL! Wouldn't you like to know? LOL! Thanks for the review Whitney. . .
Reviewer: Teeny
Signed
Date: 12/28/04 - 03:32AM
Title: Introduction
Oh my god, that was just too cute...I was ready to kill her (again) at the end of the previous chapter, but now that's she's finally accepting herself a little more, things are a lot better! And I can't help but mention the hilarity of the little freaky deaky shower thing...lol I hope it was worth cleaning the tub!
Author's Response: LOL. . . A shower with Justin is worth cleaning anything, lol. I'm glad that you didn't want to kill her, that's what I'm always going for, lol. Thanks for the review Teeny.
Reviewer: Michelle
Anonymous
Date: 12/27/04 - 09:31PM
Title: Better Than Nothing
Oh thank the Lord, she finally got it through her skull. For some reason, I have a feeling you're about to bring on some more drama though, so update soon please!
Author's Response: Oh Michelle, you know me so well. . . lol. I have to have DRAMA!!! That's who I am, lol. Thanks for the review.
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