Reviews For Love & Trust
Reviewer: Ashley Signed Date: 12/16/04 - 05:01PM Title: Birthday Extravaganza

SCORE! Dude, you had me scared at the birthday party. My mind went wandering into 'What if' mode and I had thoughts of JC and Lonnie, and *Cringe* Justin and Britney. But you salvaged my sanity and finally let those three magical words slip out. *Swoon*

Author's Response: LOL! JUSTIN AND BRITNEY!!! *Insert vomitting* I would never put you through that, hell, I wouldn't put myself through writing that! LOL! I'm glad that I salvaged your sanity because you had to be crazy to believe I would do such a thing! LOL!


Reviewer: Ashley Signed Date: 12/16/04 - 04:44PM Title: Unwanted Interruption

TEASE! lol No, I think this is definitely worth the wait... in some twisted way. I mean, I'd probably wait forever for JT to tell me he was in love with me. But damn, after the night before, she should've figured that out. *Wipes tear* That was so romantical. Ahh, I love them. And it's rare, but I think I actually like Justin more than anything. He's so genuine, and romantic, and ... you know, all that good stuff. I love that he's constantly trying to bring her out of her shell. Lonnie best to learn to embrace them curves. - 'Tis why he has a weakness for the sistas. Love it, girl! All that reassurance, she should know by now that the superficial imperfections don't mean anything. Your lips, your eyes, your smile, your kiss, I must admit - it's a part of me... But the best quality that's hooking me is that you're loving me for me... Yeah, I had to bust out with that song, cuz I love it. And as Justin falls further in love with Alonsha, I fall further in love with them. Purely awesome.

Author's Response: I'm so glad that I making you love my character and Justin so much! The curves definitely makes 'em weak! She'll need some time to embrace what God has given her, we all get a little insecure. I would make Alonsha bust out with a song, but she can't sing, so why put Justin through that torture? LOL! Keep reading it, loving it, and reviewing it!

Author's Response: I'm so glad that I making you love my character and Justin so much! I sounded like a slave! I meant to say was: I'm glad that I keep making you love Alonsha and Justin more and more. That's better. . .lol.


Reviewer: Ashley Signed Date: 12/16/04 - 04:25PM Title: Breakfast, A Feeling, And Some Sexual Healing

Dude, did I really spell 'signs' wrong? Yeah, I did. See what your story does? I can't even think straight. But okay, back to reading.

Oh, and I am PROUD to be your homeslice, girl. Now, I'm the shit, too! Watch out boy. Get back then. Watch how ya actin'... Okay, yes, next chapter now lol.

Author's Response: LOL, you should be proud. Becoming a homeslice is an honor! LOL! Don't blame me for your spelling errors, lol. Just kidding! I can't spell anything write, I'm still surprised people are reading my story!

Author's Response: I just spelled right wrong. Well not wrong, it was just the wrong type of right. . . yeah I'm gonna shut up now!


Reviewer: Ashley Signed Date: 12/16/04 - 04:21PM Title: Breakfast, A Feeling, And Some Sexual Healing

Well, I must say that this is getting very iiiiinteresting. What's goin' on in that Timberbrain, eh? (I love how I just make up Timberwords lol) I'm getting this vibe of sexaholism from Justin. That could get awkward for a shy little somethin' like Lonnie. But then, his pussywhipped tendencies may just be the preliminary signes of being in, dare I say, LOVE? Hmm, I think so. This just might make my day. I'm scared to keep reading because I know that I'm nearing the last update, but I shall push on and endure the inevitable wait once I get there. Still loves it!

Author's Response: LOL! I'm just. . . speechless. Thanks for the review! I'm not telling you jack! KEEP READING WOMAN!


Reviewer: Ashley Signed Date: 12/16/04 - 03:50PM Title: A Shower of Confusion

He's worth the risk, bitch! Man, don't let me pass Alonsha on the street. She'd be gettin' a nice dose of an Ash-ass-kickin'. *My 464347369th sigh of the past half hour* I'm sorry, but if I had him whipped like that, ain't nothin' keepin' us apart. But then... perhaps that's why I don't have him whipped. She's onto something here. Hmm, carry on...

Author's Response: LOL! Ash-ass-kickin'! I love hearing from you girl! You are officially my HOMESLICE! LOL! Yeah, I'm a dork like that! Thanks for the review!


Reviewer: Ashley Signed Date: 12/16/04 - 03:03PM Title: Forgive Me

Oh, damn it all to hell. They were doing so well. (Ooh, rhyming! lol) *Another sigh* Okay, so I'm glad they're speaking now. I was getting a bit frustrated with all the Justin-bashing. He made a mistake. - Could happen to anybody. But dude, friends? FRIENDS? Unless it's on Must-See Thursday, Friends SUCKS. I hope this is a temporary thing, cuz I'm so over the whole 'Friend' vibe lol.

Author's Response: LOL! I don't even know what to say to this review. I've been laughing my ass off reading these. I understand that you're fustrated with the whole "friends" business, but Justin must pay the consequences for his actions. . .


Reviewer: Ashley Signed Date: 12/16/04 - 02:50PM Title: My Stupid Mouth

Oh, Justin. Your stupid mouth is right. You're killin' me, smalls. *Sigh* The happiness can never last too long, it seems. But hopefully, Miss Daniels will see the error in his ways as just another extension of being Justin and forgive him. I mean, after sex like that, we don't have time to be holdin' grudges. She knows good and damn well that that boy really likes her. She's just using this as an excuse to run away from her real feelings for him. Yup, that's all it is. Or, okay maybe not lol. But either way, this is hot. And the soundtrack that we're developing here - LOVES it! ;)

Author's Response: LOL! The sex was great wasn't it? LOL! I wish I knew. . . Anywho, I appreciate the review again Ashley. And that soundtrack idea you've got going here is making me think. . . "Love & Trust: The Sounds of Drama" Hmm. . .lol.


Reviewer: Michelle Anonymous Date: 12/16/04 - 01:04PM Title: Skillet Sensations

You're killing me here with these cliff hangers already. Update soon!

Author's Response: Michelle! My cliff hangers keep 'em coming! LOL! I'll update ASAP!


Reviewer: Ashley Signed Date: 12/16/04 - 11:21AM Title: Say Yes

DAMN, girl. Shit, I feel like I just got some Timberass. That was awesome. No, in fact, that was like Ashton Kutcher AWESOME. Girl, you are officially the shit. Man, what I wouldn't give to be in Lonnie's shoes. And you know 'Say Yes' is my jam. I think that was like, the perfect chapter lol.

And I like Ryan Seacrest, too lol.

Author's Response: LOL! I'm the shit? I like the song of that! LOL! Timberass??? LMAO! You are hilarious Ashley. I'm glad it was the PERFECT chapter, always nice to have my work appreciated! Thanks SOOOOO much for the review.


Reviewer: Ashley Signed Date: 12/16/04 - 11:06AM Title: Shame On Me

Girrrrl, you used my song! I saw Ryan Cabrera and got so excited I could barely read. Yes, shame on Justin another time. It's time to get dirrty. It's about time for his arrival. *Wink, Wink* lol

Author's Response: LMAO! Ashley, you are too much! I love that song, and many more by Mr. Cabrera, so I had to use him in here. Thanks for the review Ashley!





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