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Reviewer: UTCBeauty
Anonymous
Date: 10/29/04 - 10:41PM
Title: Shame On Me
AWESOME!!!! this is getting really juicy...i think it's cool that justin can't keep his thoughts off of her..i can't wait for the next chapter!!!
Author's Response: Thanks so much for your review. . .I'll post as soon as I can!!
Reviewer: Danyelle
Anonymous
Date: 10/28/04 - 09:56PM
Title: What Would Happen?
great story, i love it so far. You have done a great job at developing the characters, and making the story good. But i can sense something bad is going to happen! Update soon!!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review Danyelle. . .you'll just have to wait and see if your prediction is correct! *muah*
Reviewer: Michelle
Anonymous
Date: 10/24/04 - 08:42PM
Title: What Would Happen?
Great chapter. They finally kissed! Please update soon. :)
Author's Response: I know, I was trying to get the whole thing perfectly. . .I did okay. Thanks for the review!!!
Reviewer: Nikki G.
Anonymous
Date: 10/23/04 - 05:21PM
Title: What Would Happen?
I love it. Thanks! UPdate soon. J&B!
Author's Response: Thanks so much Nikki!!! *muah*
Reviewer: nini22
Anonymous
Date: 10/20/04 - 11:33PM
Title: Tease
why won't she just give in she is acting like such a prude
Author's Response: Aww, geez, give Alonsha some slack. . .lol. . .jk! Thanks for the review!!
Reviewer: Gigi
Anonymous
Date: 10/20/04 - 06:42PM
Title: Tease
Finally!
Author's Response: LOL. . .thanks for the review Gigi!
Reviewer: Ani
Anonymous
Date: 10/19/04 - 05:58PM
Title: Weird
Wow, I've been reading you story and it's damn addictive. Good job!
Author's Response: Thanks so much Ani, I really appreciate the review!!!
Reviewer: Wh|tney
Anonymous
Date: 10/16/04 - 02:41PM
Title: Weird
friggin addictive...way to go Timb, more soon. what does Alonsha look like or gimme a real life comparison/person
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. Alonsha kinda looks like the girl in the link below:
http://www.portrait-artist.org/pics/black-woman-shorthair1.jpg
Author's Response: screw that link! I'll make a graphic thingy to show you the characters.
Reviewer: Nikki G.
Anonymous
Date: 10/16/04 - 01:33PM
Title: Weird
Very nice chappy. Great job. Update very soon. Thanks! J&B!
Author's Response: Thanks Nikki, I appreciate the review!!!
Reviewer: mmw
Anonymous
Date: 10/13/04 - 11:04AM
Title: Introduction
I think the story is coming along quite well. It has certainly peaked my interest. I can not wait for an update. Happy Writing!
Author's Response: Thanks mmw. I appreciate the review from you. I'll update ASAP.
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