Reviewer: Nikki G.
AnonymousDate: 10/12/04 - 09:10PM
Title: Double Date
Good job. Upadte soon. Thanks! J&B!
Author's Response: Thanks, Nikki. It's always nice to get a review from you. I'll try to update ASAP. Thanks for the review *muah*
Reviewer: Ashley
AnonymousDate: 10/12/04 - 08:48PM
Title: Double Date
Girl, you made my day with an update. Shoot, I'm in Alonsha mode, ready to just sink into bed now. Staying true to the pattern, I genuinely like Justin's girlfriend again. She's not better than Lonnie, but I guess Alyssa will do until Justin and Alonsha can pull their heads out of their asses and stop being stoopid. LOL. Keep it comin', ma.
Author's Response: I'm glad I made your day. . .lol. You'll just have to wait and see what happens Ash! Thanks for the review.
Reviewer: AshleySignedDate: 10/11/04 - 05:18PM
Title: A Party, A Bet, and A Rebound Solution
Aight, so now I'm pissed that I sat here and read everything in one sitting, leaving me to have to WAIT for an update. I can't believe that Justin's really gonna be this stupid and do his girl like that. And now Lonnie is tryin' to be all scandalous and shit. Geez. Love and Trust, people! Lack of trust always ruins the love! Come on, girls and boys. Let's get it together. Oh, and please update like... NOW. ;-)
Author's Response: Don't worry Ashley, the update is on it's way. I'm a little slow with all the shit going on in my life but no worries it should be up by the weekend. So keep your eyes open!!!
Yeah, so I just laughed my ass off with them. They're just too damn adorable. Love's in the air and it's bout time for Alonsha and Justin to take a big ass whiff of it.
Author's Response: WOW, that's Ashley for all of your reviews!! I really appreciate it. Thanks for taking the time to do it, I really, really appreciate it!!!!
Reviewer: AshleySignedDate: 10/11/04 - 04:58PM
Title: The First Stage
And so as I was saying... I love this story. I love that Trace just ripped Justin a new asshole about his infuriating ignorance in relation to Alonsha, and I'm glad that Tiffany did the same for her girl. I hate when there's an obvious attraction goin' on and everyone sees it except the two people involved. And then, they find the need to stick to this ''Just Friends'' mess. There's No. Such. Thing. Oh, did I mention that I love it?
Reviewer: AshleySignedDate: 10/11/04 - 04:51PM
Title: The First Stage
Okay, I haven't read all of the chapter yet, but I effin' love that Nothin' Else fits them so perfectly. As I revisit the lyrics in my head, it's all coming together in this slow ass brain of mine. AWESOME.
Reviewer: AshleySignedDate: 10/11/04 - 04:44PM
Title: New Revelation
I love the line STRAIGHT from Cry Me A River. I found out from hiiiim. I guess that ho is shady no matter what realm she exists in, eh? The damage is done, so I guess I'll be leavin'. (Yes, I am a dork lol.)
Okay, I usually hate Britney, but you just made me like her in one chapter. I'd say that's a job well damn done. This way, I can feel sorry for her when Alonsha steals Justin from her. Cuz that is what's gonna happen... right? ;-)
Reviewer: AshleySignedDate: 10/11/04 - 04:14PM
Title: Never Again
Part of that chapter reminded me of when Ross and Rachel broke up after he slept with that wench, Chloe. Totally off topic, but I just wanted to say that lol. But besides that, I really liked the emotions in that chapter. You think it hurts to see the one person you love most in this fucked up world cheating on you, but then you realize that what really hurts is that you don't wanna let them go in spite of it. Ahh, love sucks. This story is awesome, though. Stay strong, Lonnie!
Author's Response: LOL! Love does suck, LOL! Ashley, you crack me up. Thanks for the review.
Ugh. Men. They're always too good to be true. Even the fictional mofos. At least she found out before she walked down the aisle. That would've just been devastating. Aight, this better mean that JT is coming to the rescue!
Author's Response: LMAO! Mofo, ROFL! That is some messed up timing, isn't it? What can I say, he's an ass. Don't worry, JT's coming, lol.
