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Reviewer: Ashley
Signed
Date: 10/11/04 - 03:46PM
Title: Painfully Beautiful
Yeah, that was some incredible writing there. I think you captured the awkardness and the beauty of ''The First Time'' amazingly well. Kyle and Lonnie are so perfect, I'm scared to see what's gonna happen when Justin rolls his fine ass back into the picture. LOL.
Author's Response: LOL! Really???? That's nice to know, lol. They're cute now, but you wait and see, LOL! Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: Ashley
Signed
Date: 10/11/04 - 03:23PM
Title: Okay
Okay, shock factor in full effect here. I can't believe her father is just that damn evil. Not only does he beat her but then puts the blame on the one person that's made her smile. Man, that's rough. I hope she finds some refuge somewhere cuz baby girl isn't gonna last much longer in these conditions. Someone help her!
Author's Response: I know, her daddy is an asshole. But what can I say? Dumbasses do dumb shit like blame the innocent. DOn't worry, things will ease up.
Reviewer: Ashley
Signed
Date: 10/11/04 - 03:07PM
Title: Mistake
That was an amazing chapter. I could feel her pain in every word. I was literally squirming every time her father said another word. Even if it is heartbreaking, that chapter exhibited powerful imagery. I can't wait to see where this is going.
Author's Response: Thanks, sugar.
Reviewer: Gigi
Anonymous
Date: 10/10/04 - 05:20PM
Title: A Party, A Bet, and A Rebound Solution
Well this is going to be interesting.
Reviewer: nini22
Anonymous
Date: 10/10/04 - 12:16AM
Title: A Party, A Bet, and A Rebound Solution
This is getting to gooooooooooodddddddd
Author's Response: You'll just have to just wait and see, thanks for the review nini22!
Reviewer: Nikki G.
Anonymous
Date: 10/09/04 - 11:06PM
Title: A Party, A Bet, and A Rebound Solution
I love it and yeah...this bet is definitely gonna bit ehim in the ass. Update soon. Thanks! J&B!
Author's Response: Thanks Nikki, and it's definitely gonna bite him in the ass. . .lol
Reviewer: Wh!tney
Anonymous
Date: 10/09/04 - 09:08PM
Title: A Party, A Bet, and A Rebound Solution
bets are BAD...really bad
Author's Response: Thanks for the review Wh!tney!
Reviewer: Sassy
Anonymous
Date: 10/08/04 - 01:20PM
Title: Introduction
I'm really enjoying this story and can't wait to see where Alonsha and Justin tale their relationship. I'm ready for more.
Author's Response: I'm just as ready as you are! I'll update ASAP! Thanks for the review, I really appreciate it!
Reviewer: lila
Anonymous
Date: 10/08/04 - 02:08AM
Title: Stage Two, Unfortunately
they are so cute together!
You are really good at describing the chemistry thats going on between them!
Author's Response: Oh, thank you lila! I'm trying my best to be as descriptive as I can so you can really see how they each progress in their feelings for one another. I really appreciate the review and another thanks for the compliment!
Reviewer: Nikki .
Anonymous
Date: 10/08/04 - 12:28AM
Title: Stage Two, Unfortunately
Great job. Please update soon. Thanks! J&B!
Author's Response: It's about time Nikki, I thought I lost you! LOL! Thanks for the review!
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