Reviewer: AshleySignedDate: 01/28/05 - 10:21PM
Title: My Heart Is Gone
Shiiiiit, my heart is gone, too. WHY did she just do that? How could you split up LonnieLake as soon as I gave them the cute little name. Now it's just Lonnie and Lake. That's no damn fun! But you know what's sad? I'm not even mad at Justin. You can't have love without trust and Alonsha needs to grasp that whole concept before she tries to say she loves Justin. Get a clue, Lonnie. LOVE AND TRUST. It's the name of the effin' story! *Sigh* Could she be any more insecure. I mean, yeah, I would be suspicious with a ho like Danyelle running around, but that's what brass knuckles and kickboxing was made for. Kick her ass. Not his. He loves you, girl. Oh man, fix it, homeslice. You're breakin' my heart here.
Author's Response: Aw, LonnieLake. . . Yes, the two have split. I needed the drama, what can I say? LOL! Lonnie definitely needs to understand that trust is key in a relationship, but she has her reasons for insecurity. Brass knuckles and kickboxing? LMAO! You are too funny, girl. I'll update ASAP, homeslice.
Reviewer: Danyelle
AnonymousDate: 01/28/05 - 10:20PM
Title: My Heart Is Gone
ummm......
Author's Response: At a lost for words, huh? LOL! Thanks for the review!
Ut freakin Oh! lolol, Girl! I almost choked on my starburst reading that! You got me, Ms. Timberlake. I was sooo not expecting that!! That wasn't suppose to happen! Danyelle's a chick, she should know better. If she's as respectful as Justin seems to think, she should know how DISRESPECTFUL it is to answer his cell phone when he's "in the shower" Okay, that's it! I'm gonna round up a Whoreyelle anti-group, because I want to kick some ass. He totally got offensive about it. I can understand like he'd get mad because she doesn't "trust him". But if he really didn't think that Whoreyelle liked him, he wouldn't have gotten like that. Yeah, I know guys, Timberdumbass. Ugh ..I feel for her. I sooo feel for her. lolol, And the sad thing about it is, I talk like this is actually happening! Loved it! Omg, I soo need more!
Author's Response: LOL! Wow, I really got to you guess! LOL! Whoreyelle anti-group???? LOL! Hilarious. I wanna be the moderator to the at one, lol. I'm glad you're getting into it, that's what I like to see. I'll update soon, but I have to give Michelle a day to recover, lol.
Reviewer: Ani
AnonymousDate: 01/28/05 - 09:36PM
Title: My Heart Is Gone
Ah. That didn't happen. It didn't happen. It WASN'T supposed to happen! I hope they work it out. Love shall overcome obstacles. >.
Author's Response: Well Ani, maybe love will. . .maybe love won't. Thanks for the review.
Reviewer: MichelleSignedDate: 01/28/05 - 09:22PM
Title: My Heart Is Gone
OH MY GOD! LOL. You're killing me over here, love. I can't take this pressure! I really can't stand that chick Danyelle (the character, not the reviewer lol). I mean she broke them up. Now that just ain't right. Come on now. And Justin didn't even try to understand where she was coming from. You have to update soon...well, no. Give me like at least a day to recover please? I don't wanna push the stress. lol
Author's Response: LOL! Did I really hurt you that much! Wow. . .lol. I'm not trying to stress you out, girl, I just needed the drama, lol. Don't worry, I'll give you a day's recovery, lol.
Hmm...I see the dancing hoebag/shedevil/any insult displaying her annoyingness is starting to be a bit of a problem for Alonsha. I'm have restored my faith in Justin, who, by the way, was too cute in that chapter, but NOT in that little witch, so she'd better watch her step. Guilt is not a problem for me, so breaking her legs, neck, spine and other important bones would be a doddle. And Alonsha should stop worrying about Justin and Danyelle. The more she worries, the more I do!! (And yes, I do realize it is not healthy to live through the character, but it's all you and your good writing's fault, Timberlake!!) Justin should just stuff the tour up Danyelle's ass and stay home with Alonsha and start making some "Timberbabies" as you so aptly called them! Sorry for the rambling, but I'm just so ready to whoop some dancing ass my mind's all over the place!! Great update, of course!!
Author's Response: LOL! Wow, I really made you guys hate Danyelle, score for me! LOL! Yeah well, he can't up and leave the tour unfortunately, but hopefully all the faith you're putting in Justin won't be in vain. I would've broken the hoe's legs too, but I wouldn't want to injure my characters, that wouldn't be nice, lol. I'm sorry for making you live through my characters, my apologies, lol. Okay, I'm gonna start to ramble, but I'd rather start working on the next installment. There might be some Timberbabies in my future. . . or not, lol. Okay, thanks for the review Teeny. I love to read 'em. I'll update ASAP!
You know, maybe we think too much alike or somethin', but I started writing something dangerously close to this chapter last night. Freaky, I tell ya. I'mma have to do a little editing before I post it lol. And DUDE, how am I missing these updates? I came on here wondering why the hell you hadn't updated yet, and lo and behold, you did! I'm seriously slacking. But yo, you know I love it, right? As Brian McKnight would say, There's no good in 'goodbye.' That's a lie. I damn sure don't remember the rest of the words, or even what song that is, but you know I speak the truth. That shit is harsh. I just feel bad for any relationship that has to endure long distance. Especially the beautiful Alonstin. Yup, that's my name for them. I haven't decided between that and LonnieLake, but we'll see. But anyway, yeah with a hobag like Danyelle tagging along and being all mischievous, I wish Justin would just forget about the tour and be with his girl. I don't like extraneous girls just hanging around and making love triangles and squares and pentagons possible. Break her legs, her back, neck... whatever. Just get rid of the biatch. LOL. I'm gonna shut up now. I'm hungry and waiting for some Brody-love. Please forgive me and continue with this kick-arse story. :-D
Author's Response: LMAO! I'm loving the names Ash, but I must admit LonnieLake is very tempting, lol. Did you really write a chapter that close to mine??? LOL! That is freaky *steps inside the Twilight Zone*. Yes, Danyelle is stirring up some trouble, but only adds to the drama. Don't worry about it, I'll make you love it. Oh, I got my weekly dosage of Brody-love last night. That boy gets sweeter every week, I just love him and Captin Oats, lol. Thanks for the husky review Ash, I'll update soon.
aaaaaaaaawwwwwwwww I felt that chapter so much. I wanted to cry for her as they where saying goodbye at the gate. Why did he have to tour with x-tina and the slut D. As me and the other readers have all been saying, if that biotch tries anything I want lonnie to give that hoe a east side beat down
Author's Response: LMAO!!!!! Girl, you know about the east side beat down!?! LOL! Slut D??? LOL! Man, that's funny, lol. I love your reviews! I'm glad I pulled your heart strings with this chapter. I will update as soon as I can. Thanks again.
Ahh, you're gonna make me cry over here! LOL. Yeah, totally not like that Danyelle girl, and I'm in it with Trace on that one. Break the girl's legs or something, haha. Great chapter as always. Update soon!
Author's Response: LOL! So violent, Michelle! LOL! I'm not trying to make you cry! Okay, so maybe I was, lol. Thanks for the review Michelle.
