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Reviewer: Liz
Anonymous
Date: 01/04/06 - 04:57PM
Title: Chapter Five
Great twist!!!! I wasn't expecting that at all... I'm still wondering what happened to his mom
Reviewer: amk16
Signed
Date: 07/27/05 - 07:53AM
Title: Chapter Five
You have to post more! PLEASE! Pretty please with an ice cream sunday and a cherry on top. No, seriously, that was an amazing chapter and you have to write more soon. Awesome story.
Reviewer: amk16
Signed
Date: 07/27/05 - 07:15AM
Title: Chapter Three
I can't believe you said this wasn't well written! I absolutely love this story. You're descriptions in the begging of this chapter are so different from most writers. They're so realistic and they just make sense, but for some reason, a lot of writer's, including myself, can't always explain things so wonderfully. I just hope that Justin doesn't do anything else to mess things up. I know that he'd gonna have a hard time talking to his friends and being the person that he wants to be, but I hope that he doesn't screw things up by hurting her.
Reviewer: amk16
Signed
Date: 07/27/05 - 06:56AM
Title: Chapter Two
I love the way you describe things. Your use of words is really fun and interesting- besides the fact that Justin is a jerk. That's just frustrating. It helps that the audience knows what he's thinking, so I kind of feel bad because I know that he wants to step out of his comfort zone, but it's stil not cool of him to mess with people's emotions like that.
Reviewer: Jes
Anonymous
Date: 03/24/05 - 11:57PM
Title: Chapter Five
Good story. Please post more soon.
Reviewer: Leeann
Signed
Date: 02/07/05 - 12:41AM
Title: Chapter Five
stories really good so far. keep up the good work and update soon :)
Reviewer: Teeny
Signed
Date: 11/29/04 - 02:47PM
Title: Chapter One
This is such a great story! Please update soon!
Reviewer: Rosa
Anonymous
Date: 09/14/04 - 11:51PM
Title: Chapter Five
This is such an amazing story. You're doing a great job with this!..please, PLEASE update soon!!
Reviewer: Timberlake
Signed
Date: 09/12/04 - 05:15PM
Title: Chapter Four
That was so sweet!! Justin got all nervous! That was romantic.
Reviewer: xkcfanx
Signed
Date: 09/11/04 - 11:36PM
Title: Chapter Five
:: jaw drops :: wow that was an amazing chapter you have there :) I certainly can not wait for more...
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