Reviewer: autumn_romance
AnonymousDate: 03/27/06 - 10:45PM
Title: The One Where They Meet
Damn. I'm liking this.
Reviewer: Liz
AnonymousDate: 03/23/06 - 10:01PM
Title: The Last One
For the millionth-fucking-time I loved this story...lol. Are you from NYC cause their personas resemble that of true New Yorkers. This story made me smile. Keep up the awesome work.
Reviewer: MadcrazychickSignedDate: 07/19/05 - 11:55AM
Title: The Last One
Ah, I love, love, loved it! Every single chapter. That's the best fanfic story I've read in a long while. Hell, it was even better than the last book I read. lol Anyways, I'm so glad that everything wound up working out for Justin and Dawn cause I was really starting to think it was going to end on a sad note. And their relationship is so...I dunno...cute, great, funny, adorable...lol I can't find the words I want, but I just loved them as a couple. Man, I liked that story so much that I'm definitely going to have check out your other stories.
Reviewer: MadcrazychickSignedDate: 07/19/05 - 08:43AM
Title: The One Where They... Well... Just Read
When I first started reading this, I'd just glanced casually over the chapter titles and figured this one was 'the one where they have sex' which it turned out to be, but after reading about Mike and whatnot I figured it was going to be 'the one where they...fall apart' or something along the lines of she confesses and their relationship goes to hell. But damn, now he's fallen for her. He's admitted it out loud and she's turned out to be the very thing I'd been hoping in the back of my mind that she wouldn't be: his mother. She's got a husband and son and she's off being with another man, neglecting both. How exactly did she pull off escaping to be with Justin? But she's not completely like his mother, I mean, according to Justin his dad absolutely adored his mother but she still ran off with another man. But then again, that's from his perspective so who really knows if that's true. But they do say that men marry their mothers likewise women marry their dads. Ah, damn, they are so good together. I want them to work out -without her son having to be neglected - but I dunno if that's gonna happen. *sighs* Anyways, I must say you have great song choice. Ms. Badu "Next Lifetime" in the last chapter, "Say Yes" Floetry in this one. Both are my jams! lol
Reviewer: MadcrazychickSignedDate: 07/18/05 - 10:17PM
Title: The One With The Wish
*jaw drops after reading last sentence* What?!? She's married? Gawddamn, girl. What other secrets does she have? A husband, a kid...shit. Well at least, maybe she's been separated from her husband for so long that it's almost like they're divorced only it hasn't been made official yet for some reason. I really hope she doesn't go home to this man every night. Ah, sweet lord jesus, the drama. I love it! lol
Reviewer: MadcrazychickSignedDate: 07/18/05 - 08:50PM
Title: The One With The VapoRub
Before the Sharry fiasco, I was thinking how Justin must really like her...considering how he gave her the keys to his place. Even if it was only temporary. Cause according to one of the many Eric Jerome Dickey books I've read over the years, there's three important keys that a man can give out. Now I can't remember if the house key is the first or the second, but the last one is an intangible one...the key to his heart. But then it turns out that him giving her the key was probably him just being a lazy bastard and not wanting to have to come and open the door for her after all. Or maybe not...hmmm, I'm not completely sure whether he falls entirely on the lazy bastard side of things or the opening-himself-up-a-bit side. Anyways, Sharry...what a skank ho! What does Justin wanna run around with heffas like her for when he has someone like Dawn who's willing to risk her health to come and see about his and rub him down with Vick's Vapor Rub?!? (which is something I've always hated because of the smell that makes falling asleep with it on damn near impossible for me and not to mention it's got this onion effect too that gets me all watery in the eyes...but the thought of rubbing it on Justin...lol) Anyways, that lil bitch (Justin) better pull his head outta his ass soon (next chapter) and fix things with her! Everything was going so well and then comes the hos to fuck it all up. lol Oh and so I finally know the real reason she didn't want him coming to her place. She has a son. No wonder she's been trying to get close, yet still holding him somewhat at arm's length. Anyways that was a yet another great chapter. Did I mention before that I'm loving this story? Cause if I didn't...I'm so wrong for that. Cause I'm most definitely loving the shit outta this! lol :D I feel like I'm forgetting to say something, but I've probably already said too much so I'm just gonna shut up now.
Reviewer: MadcrazychickSignedDate: 07/18/05 - 04:05PM
Title: The One At Dinner And In the Park
Dawn animatedly debated why Britney Spears is twenty times better than Christina Aguilera. After reading that line I was ready to pounce all over any kind of argument that she could possibly think of as to why Britney could be better than Christina, but then as I read her argument, I"m like 'oh she doesn't mean Britney, she meant Christina...somehow the names are switched.' Because Christina's the one that can sing, dyed her hair black and came out second, and Britney's the one who's only got dancing on her side. lol Anyways, I'm a self-proclaimed Music Goddess so I had to comment on that. :p Anyways, I love Jill Scott's "A Long Walk" I was just singing that to my dog while I was walking her in this ridiculously hot heat-stroke-provoking weather. But I ain't heard the actual song in a minute though, and now I really want to. lol Okay besides the music stuff...um, Justin and Dawn are hilarious, in a mean way. But nevertheless hilarious. And this story just keeps getting better and better with every chapter. I think I'm finally going to have to put someone on my favorite author's list...
Reviewer: MadcrazychickSignedDate: 07/18/05 - 08:43AM
Title: The One At The Game
“Excuse me, but did you eat the woman that usually sits here?” LMAO! Damn, he's cold-blooded. That's good that girl had a headset on at the time, but then again if she didn't I doubt he would have had the balls to say that. Anyways, another great chapter. I'm really liking Dawn and Justin together.
Reviewer: MadcrazychickSignedDate: 07/18/05 - 12:25AM
Title: The One Where They Go To Lunch
I figured all this womanizing and bitch, bitch talk had to stem from something traumatic and his mother walking out on his dad and subsequently him too definitely was it. I just hope that by the end he's able to get past that, cause all this bitch stuff has gotten stop. Maybe DJ can teach him some manners. Oh and in case you read this - and care - I am still reading your other story 'Surreal World' even though I've been a horrible reader and haven't reviewed it in a loooong time. But I will soon and then the next thing you'll know I'll be bugging you for updates. lol Anyways I'm liking this so far.
Reviewer: laura
AnonymousDate: 06/21/05 - 08:55AM
Title: The One Where They Meet
yeah, i just read this whole thing again and i have to say i love it more each time.... :)