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Reviewer: Rosa
Anonymous
Date: 10/08/04 - 11:23AM
Title: The One With That Guy
Great job! I wonder what'll happen when Justin finds out?...I love that song too..more soon!
Reviewer: Audrey
Anonymous
Date: 10/07/04 - 10:50PM
Title: The One With That Guy
I really like this one. This is Audrey from abs. This story is different and getting better as you read. Kudows for the Badu song. I like how the chapter titles remind me of Friends. I miss that show. Anyhoo, good job! :)
Reviewer: Drea
Anonymous
Date: 10/07/04 - 07:56PM
Title: The One With That Guy
i love this storie...i love how u write their point of views without boring the sh** outta of me..lol..greattt job..update soon
Reviewer: Gigi
Anonymous
Date: 10/07/04 - 05:19PM
Title: The One With That Guy
I loved it too! Poor DJ her life is so complicated right now not only does she have a husband but a son too wow. But I want to know in the beginning how did her husband know it was Justin on the phone when it didn't give his whole name? I like the use of the song in this chapter.
Author's Response: Ah, you're paying attention to detail. I love that! It was actually her cell phone on the mail table that he saw Justin's name appear on. But I'm glad you mentioned it so now I know that I should find a way to make that clearer lol. Thanks. Muah! - Ash.
Reviewer: Timberlake
Signed
Date: 10/07/04 - 04:11PM
Title: The One With That Guy
Damn, her husband is a jerk! DJ is so complicated. I hope that Justin does catch her in the end. LOVED IT!!! Update please!!!
Reviewer: alex
Anonymous
Date: 10/07/04 - 12:21AM
Title: The One At The Club
loving it and loving the fact that you used jonh mayer too. can't wait for an update
Reviewer: lice
Anonymous
Date: 10/05/04 - 06:06PM
Title: The One At The Club
I´m soo in love with this story too..is just too damn good seeing Jt being himself but not doing things JT does..get it?
LOL
Reviewer: Drea
Anonymous
Date: 10/05/04 - 04:25PM
Title: The One At The Club
im in love with this story too...aww i think its so cute the way they fight with one another...update soon
Reviewer: Rosa
Anonymous
Date: 10/05/04 - 03:22PM
Title: The One At The Club
I am soo in love with this story! lol...great job, I need more..soon!
Reviewer: Timberlake
Anonymous
Date: 10/05/04 - 01:52PM
Title: The One At The Club
THEY KISSED! HAHA! She's gonna regret that in the morning! LOL! I love John Mayer, so thanks for the lyric usage. Nice artist switch up on "Like I Love You." It worked for me. PLEASE UPDATE!!!
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