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Reviewer: Kaity
Anonymous
Date: 08/11/08 - 11:09AM
Title: Kidnapped
please update so awesome LOL
Reviewer: JTCKNSYNCgirl
Signed
Date: 11/19/04 - 11:15PM
Title: Kidnapped
hi good story keep up good work, and update. :)
Reviewer: Andie Pandie
Anonymous
Date: 09/22/04 - 08:09AM
Title: Kidnapped
I see a hostage situation arising -laughs-
Reviewer: Kween
Anonymous
Date: 09/21/04 - 05:24AM
Title: First Time
That girl is pregnant.
Reviewer: Andie Pandie
Signed
Date: 09/20/04 - 12:16AM
Title: First Time
Just a little advice, put two spaces between each sentence. They all look like they run together. Know what I'm saying?
Author's Response: Thanks..I do when I'm writting it but when i copy and waste it runs together...thanks for letting me know.
Author's Response: *oops...Paste
Reviewer: Rosa
Anonymous
Date: 09/15/04 - 07:12AM
Title: Out
There's some spelling mistakes here and there but overall, nice job!
Reviewer: Andie Pandie
Signed
Date: 09/15/04 - 02:37AM
Title: Out
Seems a bit easy but believable... if you're good at it.. :)
Reviewer: Andie Pandie
Signed
Date: 09/15/04 - 01:45AM
Title: Prolong
could've rated you a little better, sorry I'm a bit critical.. :)
Author's Response: LoL aren't we all?It's cool...I'm glad someone's reading it.It's been brewing in my head for awhile.Thanks.
Reviewer: Andie Pandie
Signed
Date: 09/15/04 - 01:41AM
Title: Prolong
Interesting start... needs a little depth though... what exactly happened that they didnt do?
Author's Response: You'll find out soon enough...thanks for reviewing.
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