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Reviewer: Leanne
Anonymous
Date: 10/18/04 - 06:12PM
Title: Yours fatally
Wow, that's all I gotta say. I'm gonna go with the other people and vote for a trilogy. That would be great. Great story.
Reviewer: Gigi
Anonymous
Date: 10/03/04 - 02:10PM
Title: Yours fatally
I'm with Beauty on this one make it trilogy. I'm mean why weren't the cops watching him or watching her in that case knowing he might come by.
Reviewer: Beauty2U2004
Anonymous
Date: 10/03/04 - 01:20AM
Title: Yours fatally
WOW is all i can say. he actually killed her. that sick little shit. anyways..how the hell did he sneak in and grab her..how weird. anyways it was a great story one of the best follow ups i've ever read. i think you should do a trilogy and make the third one about what happens with justin, the kids, and marshall that should be interesting.
Reviewer: Amber
Anonymous
Date: 10/03/04 - 12:07AM
Title: Yours fatally
Wow....what a shocker...didnt figure he would kill her..but it was bound to happen i guess....great job!
Reviewer: Nikki G.
Anonymous
Date: 10/02/04 - 10:47PM
Title: Yours fatally
WOAH...WOAH...WOW. I'm speechless, kinda. I figured that would happen but was unsure. You did an amazing job because that is reality. You know I'm a big fan and of course I'll be saving it 2 my laptop. I wanted to cry...smile b/c this story is absolutely worth more than we can into words. You have a great talent and I hope to read more from you. THANKS!
Reviewer: Rosa
Anonymous
Date: 10/02/04 - 03:43PM
Title: Yours fatally
Wow. This was one of the greatest stories I've read. Even though he killed her, I liked the ending, only because it's so much different than anything else. great job girl!
Reviewer: Jeannie
Anonymous
Date: 10/02/04 - 02:51PM
Title: Yours fatally
Wow. What a shock!! That bastard. It was a great story though.
Reviewer: Brittany
Anonymous
Date: 10/02/04 - 02:48PM
Title: Yours fatally
That was wonderful. I guess people like that can't change at all. Anyway, great job!!
Reviewer: virgin_dreams
Anonymous
Date: 10/02/04 - 12:02PM
Title: Yours fatally
HOLY SHIT, OMG, guess i should had seen it coming though, i kind of like the fact that she was killed,cuz it was different, most stories like that end with the girl getting away, but it isn't always like that in real life, great story, i hope you start another new one soon, but i'll definately be coming back to read this one over again.
Reviewer: tasha
Anonymous
Date: 10/02/04 - 11:30AM
Title: Yours fatally
OH MY GOD GIRL THAT WAS OH MY I CAN'T EVEN THINK .(CLAPS) SAD BECAUSE SHE DEAD AND HE WALKS AWAY BUT THAT WAS BEAUTIFUL ,GREAT AND WONDERFUL. I WAS ANGRY I WAS SAD AND I WAS HURT ALONG WITH HER .YOU ARE A GREAT WRITER AND I LOOK FORWARD TO MORE FROM YOU
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