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Reviewer: Kween
Anonymous
Date: 10/07/04 - 02:14AM
Title: Green eyes
All I have to say is HOT!
Reviewer: Nikki G.
Anonymous
Date: 10/06/04 - 11:51PM
Title: Green eyes
Wow is all I gotta say. You did a very good job with chappy. Update soon. Thanks! J&B!
Reviewer: Kristina
Anonymous
Date: 10/06/04 - 10:36PM
Title: Green eyes
Whoa that scene with Stallone was hot and he sounds pretty too. But Justin's a little weird, he doesn't mind that there's another man fucking his girl like that? Interesting, so happy to see another chap, keep em coming:)
Author's Response: Yea imma keep em coming yup yup
Reviewer: Kween
Anonymous
Date: 10/06/04 - 12:38AM
Title: Prologue
I love it!! I love it!! I love it!! Update soon!
Author's Response: DAmn!! lolx im glad dat u like it ...imma update rite now
Reviewer: Kristina
Anonymous
Date: 10/06/04 - 12:16AM
Title: Prologue
Great start, I love the fact that Victoria has a part in the mob other than being one of those ignore, overlooked females that you see in like mob movies or something. And the relationship she has with J is pretty hot, can't wait to read more:)
Author's Response: i kno ....i had that in mind wen i created her...lolx
Reviewer: themusicfan
Anonymous
Date: 10/05/04 - 03:33PM
Title: Prologue
love this story so far
keep it coming ;)
Author's Response: im writin it right now so b on da look out 100
Reviewer: lil jb
Anonymous
Date: 10/05/04 - 02:19PM
Title: Prologue
hey where is the rest damnn it?!
Reviewer: lil jb
Anonymous
Date: 10/05/04 - 02:19PM
Title: Prologue
hey where is the rest damnn it?!
Author's Response: comin up...im writing it up rite now
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