Reviewer: amk16
Signed
Date: 08/09/05 - 08:45AM
Title: Chapter six
Give me a second to stop laughing. I actually started reading this a while ago, on your website, but I never finished it. I really like the whole premise and your writing. I love that every chapter isn't just one dimensial, so you can laugh at one section and be totally annoyed at a character the next section.
And can I just say that i'm even more in love with Cathy for the way she took care Kayla? It's really sweet of her to give up her time and pretty much her entire life to watch after her. However, knowing her backstory, I kinda' feel like robert. She should be able to spend time around kids, especially with her occupation, but she might be pushing it. She can't back out now, but I hope things don't backfire.
Anna and Brit worry me. I wouldn't be surprised if either of them do something really bitchy, but I'll shut up now and go back to reading. Keep up the good work.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I hope you go back and review my other chapters as well. :)