Reviewer: 1107red Anonymous Date: 11/10/05 - 02:28PM Title: Chapter 21

I like this...and I am glad for the way this story turned out. p.s. be careful with tenses of words, you switched back and forth a couple of times!


Reviewer: Aditya Anonymous Date: 10/05/05 - 05:28AM Title: Chapter 21

Why did you let mike go?? you evil evil witch.... I love your stories.... but you broke my heart Aditya


Reviewer: WynterAura Signed Date: 03/06/05 - 06:28PM Title: Pro-Chapter 1

I normally don't read slash. In fact I've only read one a long time ago and it was very tasteful and great. So id this. I can't wait to read the rest.

Author's Response: Thank you. This was one of my favorite stories to write. I hope you enjoy the rest.


Reviewer: helena Signed Date: 03/01/05 - 09:11AM Title: Chapter 21

Ah, I just finished this story, yeah I know I'm a little slow lol, I started it god knows how long ago. But anyway, AWESOME story! I actually didn't like Mike because he seemed too perfect, I thought he might end up being a serial killer or a creep or something, and I'm quite partial to the TimberAss myself so I'm in full support of JC's choice lol. Great story!

Author's Response: Thanks for taking the time to leave feedback. And I'm also quite partial to the Timberass. LOL Hmm? Serial killer, do I feel a new story? Never know? LOL


Reviewer: JCzNaughtyGrrl Signed Date: 11/10/04 - 11:24PM Title: Chapter 21

Okay. NOW I'm PISSED OFF. You ended it already?! Come on, now! lol. But, I DO have something good to say about it. You put "The End" at the ending like I asked so, you at least get credit for THAT. lol. Well, not like your gonna make an epilouge for it since I already friggin' asked you to make one for VOAFH but, noooooo. lmao. Great, great story. As always. :D Oh, and I updated my story! Yay! lol. Sorry it took so long, I was SHOPPING, baby!! lol. I got home last night and just went to bed. I wanna tell you one of the things I got, but I'm not sure if you'll get pissed or not. I got Britney's Greatest Hits CD. Okay now, I know she's a little hoe for cheating on Justy and breaking his heart, but that doesn't mean I'm gonna stop being a fan of hers. *ducks for fear of flying Joey dolls* I don't know if your a fan or not so, I'm just keeping my head under the desk just in case. lol. Hey, you like the pictures I'm putting before every chapter? I am gonna put a new picture of the two of them before every chapter. Go look at chapter 1 again. I put that picture up after you read it so I'm not sure you if you saw it or not. Well, I'm off........to see the wizard, the wonderful......okay sorry, I'll stop now. That was a scary time there. I had like, no self control for a whole 15 seconds. Wow. Scary, man. rofl. Anywho, again, congrats on another great story and I can't wait for another one! Ttyl, girl! Oh, and don't you dare throw my *NSYNC dolls back at me, bitch! lmao. That is pure plagiarism to try and steal my idea of ganging up with Gena. Not fair, Louise! You play dirty! And I like it! lol. Talk to you soon! :D

Author's Response: I thought you'd like the, The end, I put there. I did do it just for you. :D No, won't get pissed over the Britney CD, not a huge fan of hers, but don't hate her either. Just don't let her get in the way of your next chapter and there'll be no need to throw Joey your way. lol. I'm actually working on my next story. This one is an AU, but of course it will be Joshtin, because they are my favorites. Hopefully I'll have the first chapter up soon. Until then I'll just have to enjoy your story. Oh and Gena and I can team up if we want too. :D


Reviewer: Joeylance Anonymous Date: 11/09/04 - 02:07PM Title: Chapter 21

Excellent story! I concur that I was sorry to see Mike go. In some ways he was better for JC than Justin. I hope that he finds happiness. Maybe you could write a little epilogue about that (Hint, hint). Don't you love fiction? You can re-write history. I also know what it is to lose a character. One of the hardest htings I had to do was lose a character for the good of a story. Again excellent job!

Author's Response: I thiink one of the greatest things about fiction is being able to re-write history. lol And, you are probably right about Mike being better for JC in some ways, but in the end JC's heart truly lie with Justin as it should. :D I've decided on my next story idea, so maybe you guys will get lucky sooner than later and get another story from me. This one is AU though, so I'll have to see how it goes. Thanks again for the feedback.


Reviewer: Gena Anonymous Date: 11/09/04 - 11:53AM Title: Chapter 21

WHATTTTTTTT?????????? IT'S...OVER??? You're kidding right. You're going to come back and say we just got punked right? NOOO....::sobs:: I guess i have to accept that that is the end huh? What a wonderful way to end it though, I applaud you!

Author's Response: No, you weren't punked. lol. That was a hard chapter for me to write for two reasons. I really loved Mike, so even though I had control of the story it was hard not to have him end up with JC. But, I thought it was only fitting to have it end with Mike finally being selfish and doing what was best for him, but in turn did what was best for JC as well. I actaully got tears in my eyes while writing this last chapter. Well, now to come up with a new idea. Hmmm? Ponders ideas. Until then we have to but Brynne to update her story... Until next time. Chow.


Reviewer: naya Anonymous Date: 11/08/04 - 10:42PM Title: Chapter 19

I just now found this story. Once again you've got a good one. I don't think I'm liking Justin. I'm pulling for Mike, he just proves over and over again how selfless he is with his love for JC. Keep up the good work and update soon!!

Author's Response: I'm glad you like this story. It's been fun to write and not near as intense as my last one was. :D Mike is definitely not selfish when it comes to loving JC. All he wants is for him to be happy. Since your pulling for Mike, hope the next update didn't disappoint you. Thanks again.


Reviewer: Gena Anonymous Date: 11/08/04 - 02:41PM Title: Chapter 19

man this whole story really makes me wonder how this whole Justin solo deal really went down. I wonder if the guys actually did support him. I wish they would get back together..it's making me sad. ANYWAY...wow this just keeps getting better. I can't wait to see where you go with this, should be interesting.

Author's Response: I just hope my version is nowhere near the truth. lol A joshtin pairing in real life would be just fine with me, but would hate to find out Justin really did make a decision without consulting the others. About halfway done with the next chapter. If all goes well, it'll be up later tonight or tomorrow.


Reviewer: JCzNaughtyGrrl Signed Date: 11/08/04 - 01:36PM Title: Chapter 19

This part is for Gena: Hey girl! It's Brynne! I FINALLY got my story up and I'm so nervous! lol. The first chapter is up now and I'm working on the second chapter as I type this. lol. Just wanted to let you know I won't be responding with my name anymore so your not like, who the hell is this girl responding to Louise's story claiming to be Brynne! lol. So, okay. That was about it. I'm done now. lol. Ttyl!!!! :D

Author's Response: Even though this is for Gena, since it's my story I can reply if I want too. lol Ok, done now. Carry on. :D





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