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Reviewer: Brynne
Anonymous
Date: 10/20/04 - 07:11PM
Title: Chapter 10
OMFG!!!!!!!! This is AWSOME!!! I LOOOOOOVE it!! I was cracking up when I got the part where they were both, um, molesting JC, if you will. lol. I was like, 'Oh, shit! She ACTUALLY took my advice and is gonna have a threesome!! I fucking LOVE her!' lol. And then it wasn't and then I was like, all pissed at you. hahaha. But seriously, this is like, getting SOOO good. And possibly, from the looks of things, it seems as though you ARE gonna have a threesome since they're all "together" now. Omg, I absolutley LOVE it! What a great fucking idea! lol. Sorry, I'm like all excited and freaking out now! Haha. UPDATE SOON!! I can't wait! LOVE IT! lol
Author's Response: I couldn't tell from your feedback if you liked this chapter. LOL :) I agree a threesome between JC/Justin/Mike is definitely warranted. Maybe I'll write one in. :D Thanks again. ttyl
Reviewer: Gena
Anonymous
Date: 10/20/04 - 02:52PM
Title: Chapter 10
I NEED MORE NOW!! omg omg omg this is getting TOO GOOD! ::takes breath:: ok now that i got that out let me get a few other things out.
1. WARNING Chris dolls are coming your way. Only seems fit since he is so pissed off, which is really sexy to me for some reason. ; )
2. WHOA!!!! MIKE JC AND JUSTIN IN THE SAME BED. whew! ::breaths again:::
3. how the HELL is this boy supposed to choose? I mean that's nearly impossible!
4. i mean you know..since lance is gay too why not add a little lance jc justin action? hmm ::wink wink:::
Author's Response: Poor JC is having trouble with all the men in his life now, I don't think he could handle anymore. EVen if it is Lance. LOL
Reviewer: Gena
Anonymous
Date: 10/19/04 - 03:35PM
Title: chapter 9
DAMN what a situation we have going on here. Sorry I've been out of the loop but I'm loving all these updates. :) I don't think i'm ready to threaten just yet, you've been doing pretty good here. Keep it up. For now i am out of the mental institution, but you never know I could be back at anytime.
Author's Response: What a situation in deed. Wait until the next chapter. JC is going to wish he was in another city. Runs off to finish next chapter.
Reviewer: Brynne
Anonymous
Date: 10/19/04 - 01:02AM
Title: Chapter 8
Oh, shit! :::rubs hands together::: This is gettin good, yo! lol. I'm like, all excited now! I can't wait to see what happens next! Oh, btw, I JUST sent my chapter out to you! YAY!! lol. Finally, right? lol. I love how you update so soon all the time AND you seem to be on this two-chapter thing-a-ma-gig deal too so, keep that up, also. lol. I wanna hear more! You haven't heard any threats yet from me throwing things so, just keep updating and maybe you might go a whole two weeks without a threat! lmao. Update soon! Ttyl! :D
Reviewer: Brynne
Anonymous
Date: 10/17/04 - 07:20PM
Title: Chapter 6
Ugh, LOVE IT! lol. This is gettin' good, yo! lol. Sorry, I had a "wanna be black like Justin" moment there. Please forgive me. haha. This story seems to be going in a pretty cool direction. I can't wait to see what you do with this! OOOHHH!! I just got a GREAT idea! You should have a JC/Mike/Justin threesome! OMFG!! That was be SO HOT!! lol. Can't wait to see what your gonna do with this next, you are a sick and twisted chick so, ya never know with you! lol. Ttyl babe!
Author's Response: Sick and twisted? Me? I don't know whatever gave you that idea. lol Yes, a threesome would be hot. You never know. :D
Reviewer: Gena
Anonymous
Date: 10/17/04 - 01:16PM
Title: Chapter 5
oh man i had a feeling mike was in love with jc. go figure. DAMN YOU JUSTIN. Why can't he ever just say what he has to say! damn it all the shit. I don't have the energy to really rant, still sick. But good job, thanks for the update! :)
Author's Response: I'm sorry to hear you are still feeling sick. I appreciate you giving feedback when you should be in bed covered up taking care of yourself. :) Yes, Justin is an idiot at times isn't he. lol Thanks again and get to feeling better. Louise
Reviewer: Gena
Anonymous
Date: 10/16/04 - 11:22AM
Title: Chapter 4
wow that was HOT. however just like brynne i have a major headache. I feel like somebody took my head and threw it against the wall lol. Good job and keep it up. I need to go nurse my hangover i'll talk to you later.
Reviewer: Brynne
Anonymous
Date: 10/15/04 - 08:57PM
Title: Chapter 4
HOTT hot HOT!! lol. That was NIIIICE! Liked it a lot! I have a FLAMING headache right now so, I'm not really in the mood to write a whole dealio about this chapter but, I loved it. lol. Update soon! Talk to ya later!
Author's Response: Sorry about the headache. Hopefully you took a lot of drugs and it's gone now. Glad you liked the chapter. Later.
Reviewer: Brynne
Anonymous
Date: 10/15/04 - 12:59AM
Title: Chapter 3
WHAT?!?!? Are you on DRUGS??! No no NO NO NO!!! You CANNOT just leave us there, we need a "The End" at the end! And and and, AND at LEAST give us like, a HALF a page or SOMETHING so I don't get commited within the next 48 hours! lol. Oh, that reminds me! ::waves hi to Gena through the glass of the institution:: I'll be there soon! Don't worry!! lmao. I mean, you can't just say that you can't think of anything and then run for cover! Bitch, I'm whippin' out my 6 foot tall E Bay Lance doll!! lmao. Come one, give me something PLEASEEEE?? Because you LURVE me sooooo much?!?! lol. I'll make a deal with you---you send SOMETHING in regards to an ending of this story, and I will have my chapter sent out to you by Saturday night. Deal? Deal. Okay, moving right along.......lol. Hope to hear from you soon! Oh, and e-mail me again with the address I can send the story to--I can SEND the chapter out to you by way of my AOL address, I just can't RECIEVE anything back from you, or anyone else for that matter on it. So, feedback and such would have to be sent to the Yahoo one before I sit on the phone with the stupid AOL people for 8 hours while they try to figure out why I'm not getting any e-mail. lmao. Fun, huh? You know you wanna join in! Don't lie! lol. Okay, I'll ttyl, girl! :D
Author's Response: I'll think about writing that next chapter. Maybe after being a way from it for awhile something will come to me. Throws self at your feet begging for forgivness. :D You can send your story to my whatuwish4eva@yahoo.com email address. Looking forward to reading it.
Reviewer: Brynne
Anonymous
Date: 10/14/04 - 02:51AM
Title: Chapter 3
OMFG!! I LOOOVEEE it!!!!! Gena, you and I girl, we need to be a team on this one here---right from the friggin start!! lol. I like, LOVE it!! I do have a question though, what the HELL is wrong with you? lol. Why did you start a new story without ending the other one? Hmmmmm?? Care to explain, missy?? lol. Finish the other one so Gena and I can sleep better at night. lmao. Can't wait for both updates, that's right, folks, I said BOTH updates!! lol. This looks like a good one! Oh, and I did get both of your e-mails, no need to fret, I'm typing as fast as I can! lol. I have work and such and I'm sorry I'm making you wait so long! I've had this written on paper for a while and it's just annoying to type it all out! lol. I'll get it out to you ASAP--I promise! hehe. Talk to ya later, girl! Keep up the good work! :D
Author's Response: I wondered when you'd show up, lol Conspiring against me early this time. LOL The other story? Hmm? I set down to write the last chapter and found I really ddin't have anywhere else to go with it. So, I sortofdecidednottowriteanotherchapter. Runs to take cover. But, I started another story for everyone....Brownie points for that right?
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