Reviewer: Paige
Anonymous
Date: 05/24/05 - 07:50AM
Title: Sixteen
Stealing bagels IS wrong. It starts with a bagel and then ends with a girlfriend, lol. I'm glad Kamal and Keisha got what was coming to them. Dirty whores!
Author's Response: Lol! I guess it's a good thing I don't like bagels anyway. Thanks for the review my dearest!
Reviewer: Teeny
Anonymous
Date: 05/17/05 - 09:59AM
Title: Sixteen
lmao Justin's logic astounds me. If that bastard Kamal steals a bagel AND Justin's girlfriend, it only makes sense to go for Justin too...lol Great chapter, I was worried I'd have to wait aaages for another one, so muchos gracias for the speediness =)
Author's Response: His logic is both abstract and easy to follow, bless his little cotton socks lol. Thanks for the review honey!
Reviewer: Kween
Anonymous
Date: 05/16/05 - 11:30PM
Title: Sixteen
This chapter is so funny!!
Author's Response: Thank you! Glad you're enjoying the story!
Reviewer: Nique
Anonymous
Date: 05/16/05 - 12:56PM
Title: Sixteen
*lmao* Kamal was carted off to jail! Too bad they didn't take Keisha though.
Author's Response: Kamal, Kamal the bagel stealer. I won't go into whether he bent down to pick up the soap... mwah haha lol. Thanks for your review!
Reviewer: laurencoz
Anonymous
Date: 05/15/05 - 06:15PM
Title: Sixteen
Justin is soooo adorable! He even sang at a Karaoke bar!! lol good job on this chap - can't wait for the next one
Author's Response: Kareoke is awesome... not that I've ever done it or anything... ahem... yeah... Thanks for your review!
Reviewer: Gigi
Anonymous
Date: 05/15/05 - 03:53PM
Title: Sixteen
Yeah I liked the bagel thing too. He is just so cute and funny in this story.LOL.
Author's Response: Yeah, I think that line is inspired lol. Thanks for the review, I'm glad you like his character
Reviewer: Timberlake
Anonymous
Date: 05/15/05 - 01:45PM
Title: Sixteen
Maybe they knew that he once stole a bagel and they thought that lately maybe he tried to steal me. ROFL! That's hilarious! That's right, Justin, hold that beautiful head up high and forget about that hoochie! LMAO. He's gonna be alright when he meets his future girlfriend (aka me! LOL). Ah, nice chapter. Made me crack the hell up, LOL
Author's Response: Rofl at you calling her a hoochie, and you thinking you have a chance. HA! Just kidding, maybe... Thanks for the review honey!
Reviewer: Lola
Anonymous
Date: 05/15/05 - 12:57PM
Title: Sixteen
Loved that chapter. That was good, keep up the good work. Update soon
Author's Response: Thanks for your review!
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