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Reviewer: FantaCwriter
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Date: 04/14/06 - 10:15AM
Title: Chapter Eighteen
Just wanted to let you know that the plot in this story was wonderful. It kept my attention and me "turning the pages" to find out what happened next. You did a great job and the humorous similes and metaphors were just enough to give a break in the drama of the story. I appreciate techniques like that. This is just a great story. Author's Response: Kind words which come from someone as talented as yourself is very humbling. Thank you so much! You make me blush!
Reviewer: FantaCwriter
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Date: 04/14/06 - 12:00AM
Title: Chapter Nine
Well dang. I never figured Jacques to be part of this conspiracy to keep JC and Annie away from each other. It's been intense and riveting so far. I must tell you though, before I read the last two lines of this chapter, when you wrote about Claude turning one last time, my heart broke, just knowing what was going to happen. A beautiful, yet sad ending to this chapter.
Author's Response: I\'m glad that I was able to fool you; since you are so astute in plotline twists. It pulled at my heart strings too! One of the hardest chapters I ever wrote. I cried as I was writing it. Thank you very much!
Reviewer: Mariah111384
Anonymous
Date: 04/14/05 - 04:41PM
Title: Chapter One
haha, that was precious and it begins! onto more
Author's Response: Again thank you! I lvoe to hear from other writers.
Reviewer: Mariah111384
Anonymous
Date: 04/14/05 - 04:38PM
Title: Introduction - prologue
Nice intro man. I'm excited to to what you got in store. This sounds cool already. :)
Author's Response: Thank you so very much. I kinda worried starting out in the future and then flashing back, but the story I have been told defintely has it angsty moments. lol Glad you like it
Reviewer: xkcfanx
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Date: 10/05/04 - 09:24PM
Title: Chapter Eighteen
I liked the ending very, very much I sooooooo hope there is going to be a sequel hehe :)
Author's Response: I am so glad that you liked it. I have made the corrections and will be fixing the chapters in the next few days. I hope to submit the story for review.
Yes, there will be a sequel!
Reviewer: jenna
Anonymous
Date: 10/02/04 - 05:40PM
Title: Chapter Two
hey!!
i'd like to say that ur story that i'm reading right really touch me especially this chapter
see, i'm jew and french
my grandpa lived the war , the yellow star and all those horribles things in aushwitz that i can't even describe for him and for the suffering of all my peoples during this war and before and again today with antisemitisme what u wrote there really touch that's made me think of my grandpa and how his lost all his familly and what he lived
he never tell me all this cuz i was too young and he died whan i was 5 but my dad did , he knew the story by heart hearing it so many times and he cried when he rell me all of it we cried together for hours i saw docs, movies, read books everything i could find cuz it was like making me closer to my grandpa ....
so well i just wanted to say thanks to give tribute to those people that lived there on ur story :)
Author's Response: Thank you for your very kind words. This story has a very special meaning for me. I was in a play "And Then They Came for Me" a few years ago and played a Holocuast/concentration camp survivor. Out of that experience came this story. I have gotten many nice e-mails from Jewish people like yourself. I wrote it for you. So that pepole will not forget! Thank you again your words. They mean the world to me!
Reviewer: xkcfanx
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Date: 09/07/04 - 05:39PM
Title: Chapter Seventeen
I liked this story very much....its keeping me intrigued and I like that a lot :) Although, i did notice a few spelling errors ;) and the parenthises (sp) did get a little annoying with the speaking french hehe...but over all great story cant wait to read more :D
Author's Response: I am going to go over it with a fine tooth comb, so to speak, when it is finished to pick up all of the spelling mistakes, etc. Also I realize that the parenthesis are a little distracting but I wasn't sure how else to do it. Glad you like it.
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