I liked this story very much....its keeping me intrigued and I like that a lot :) Although, i did notice a few spelling errors ;) and the parenthises (sp) did get a little annoying with the speaking french hehe...but over all great story cant wait to read more :D

Author's Response: I am going to go over it with a fine tooth comb, so to speak, when it is finished to pick up all of the spelling mistakes, etc. Also I realize that the parenthesis are a little distracting but I wasn't sure how else to do it. Glad you like it.