Just wanted to let you know that the plot in this story was wonderful. It kept my attention and me "turning the pages" to find out what happened next. You did a great job and the humorous similes and metaphors were just enough to give a break in the drama of the story. I appreciate techniques like that. This is just a great story.
Author's Response: Kind words which come from someone as talented as yourself is very humbling. Thank you so much! You make me blush!
I liked the ending very, very much I sooooooo hope there is going to be a sequel hehe :)
Author's Response: I am so glad that you liked it. I have made the corrections and will be fixing the chapters in the next few days. I hope to submit the story for review.
Yes, there will be a sequel!
