Reviewer: autumn_romanceSignedDate: 01/08/06 - 11:53PM
Title: The Party
This story seems to have potential. The third chapter is definitely better than the first two, which I think should be re-formatted because it was sort of difficult to read it the way it was. Just keep working hard at it, and I'm sure you'll get there! [:
Reviewer: SA
AnonymousDate: 10/25/04 - 09:28PM
Title: Memories
That is a good story, keeping adding more to it!
Good Joc!
