Reviewer: nsyncs1girl
Signed
Date: 11/03/04 - 06:13AM
Title: Prologue
Woah. Very deep. You change tenses a lot, but other than that, it's pretty good. :)
Reviewer: jeannie
Anonymous
Date: 11/02/04 - 07:09AM
Title: I: Fall In love in a Funeral
I love it write more
Reviewer: Gigi
Anonymous
Date: 11/01/04 - 11:22PM
Title: I: Fall In love in a Funeral
Good so far.
Reviewer: Mercedes
Anonymous
Date: 11/01/04 - 10:28PM
Title: I: Fall In love in a Funeral
interesting
Whoa that's deep, you so have to add more soon!
Reviewer: Wh|tney
Anonymous
Date: 10/31/04 - 06:23PM
Title: Prologue
interesante, mas pronto
Reviewer: Mercedes
Anonymous
Date: 10/31/04 - 05:26PM
Title: Prologue
wow, now thats powerful. write more soon!
Reviewer: jeannie
Anonymous
Date: 10/31/04 - 11:51AM
Title: Prologue
I love it. Write more.
Reviewer: Gigi
Anonymous
Date: 10/31/04 - 04:40AM
Title: Prologue
Good start.
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