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Reviewer: Danyelle
Anonymous
Date: 02/17/05 - 12:51PM
Title: Call Me
Awwww...Poor Girl. So I'm guessing to an extent that she if afraid if she goes home then the chances of her seeing Justin are going to disapear? Hopefully Justin's mamma doesn't get involved and get all weird about him like hanging out with her. Man you did it again with another wonderful chapter, leaving me here thinking all sorts of ideas and things that could happen. Grrr...haha j/k. I like where things are going. So much fun to read your story.
Author's Response: As always, thanks Danyelle! LOL! Sorry to leave ya hangin' like that but I gotta leave you wanting more. ;) I won't tell you if you're on the right track with your thinking or not because that would just ruin the next chapter for you I'm sure. :)Thanks again!
Reviewer: Teeny
Anonymous
Date: 02/16/05 - 02:12PM
Title: UNO
I just read this story all the way through and woah..definitely woah. I like the budding friendship between her and Justin, and that Justin isn't giving up on her even though she clearly wanted him to piss off!! lol My own selfish needs want something to happen between them (and fast) but I'm sure you've got something great in mind!
Author's Response: Oh my gosh! I cannot tell you how much the fact that you like my story means to me. I just love Crossing Paths and I think you are amazingly talanted. So thank you so, so, so much for taking the time to review my story. I got a woah from you...how exciting! As for what you said in your review, yeah I kind of want somthing to happen (and fast) too but you of all people should know I can't just give in like that. I have to leave the reader wanting more a little frustrated. :)LOL! Thanks again for reviewing and I hope to update soon.
Reviewer: Leeann
Signed
Date: 02/14/05 - 10:42PM
Title: UNO
that was a very good update. very touching.
Author's Response: Thanks Leeann. I hope to update soon!
Reviewer: Danyelle
Anonymous
Date: 02/14/05 - 01:27PM
Title: UNO
Wow that must really be hard on both of them to have to be apart for such a long time, considering the bong that they both have with each other now. But if their friendship is really what it is then they will be able to make it the months apart. Distance does make the heart grow fonder! :) And its great that she just treats him like regular Justin, and not some popstar. Its cute that both of them were crying. Sad but great chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks Danyelle! Like I said before I can always count on you to review...so thank you again. And you're right Mackenzie and Justin do have a strong bond but you also have to remember that Mackenzie is in a very fragile state having almost her entire family abandon her. Not that that means anything bad is going to happen *wink-wink* I'm just saying. :) Anywho, I have almost finished yet another chapter (I'm really into this story and I'm on a roll) so be on the look out for another udate soon.
Reviewer: Danyelle
Anonymous
Date: 02/12/05 - 09:45PM
Title: What's Normal?
Aww Poor girl. That like brought tears to my eyes. I couldn't imagine my life without the use of my legs. Its funny the little things we take for granted like being able to get up and put our clothes on and use the bathroom by ourself, the ability to go run or walk or play a sport. Its amazing when people who have a disability are able to overcome th impossible and succeed beyond belief. Great chapter and story, its nice to finally read a story that is different, and the girls aren't "perfect" blonde hair, blue eyes, and all of that. Its refreshing. You have done a great job so far! Can't wait to read more! :)
Author's Response: Awe, thank you Danyelle....I can always count on you to leave a great review! I know what you mean about taking the little things for granted. Writing this story has opened my eyes and made me realize how truley lucky I am. I love that you like my story because it's different; that's what I was going for. I get sick of reading and writing the stories where Justin falls in love with the "perfect" girl the first time he lays his eyes on her. Enough of me blabbing on, thanks for reading and reviewing. I already started the next chaper so more to come soon!
Reviewer: Leeann
Signed
Date: 02/12/05 - 08:47PM
Title: What's Normal?
love the story so far. you gotta update....like...right now! lol.
Author's Response: LOL! I'll try my best to update soon but sometimes it takes a while for inspiration to strike. ;) Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: Gigi
Anonymous
Date: 02/12/05 - 07:07PM
Title: What's Normal?
I can't even begin to tell you how much I loved that chapter.
Author's Response: Wow, what a great compliment. Thank you so much! I was afraid I wouldn't be able to capture all the emotions Mackenzie as well as Justin would be feeling but from your review I feel like I was sucessful. Thanks for reading!
Reviewer: Lice
Anonymous
Date: 01/21/05 - 04:31AM
Title: Progress
hey don't leave us hanging! lol
I can't wait for an update.... :D
I can't believe her brother acted so cold man...
Reviewer: lice
Anonymous
Date: 01/21/05 - 04:26AM
Title: A Smile is Worth a Thousand Words
nice chapter..it made me go 'awwww' lol
Reviewer: lice
Anonymous
Date: 01/21/05 - 04:08AM
Title: Nightmares and Dreams Come True
interesting story.
i like the way you write.
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