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Reviewer: Teeny
Anonymous
Date: 04/14/05 - 03:00PM
Title: Just Wow
It's finished??!! Noooo...sorry, I get very childish at times ;) Great story, my only complaint is, personally, I think there should've been more Enrique/Justin action, but whatever...lol Just kidding, it was perfect! Great job =)
Author's Response: Sorry it took me so long to respond but better late than never right? Thanks so much for reviewing and by now you know that wasn't really the end. I was just teasing. LOL!
Reviewer: Helena
Anonymous
Date: 04/14/05 - 02:16PM
Title: Just Wow
First off: "I should stop there shouldn’t I? Too much detail right?" NO! I wanna know every freaking deatil lol. Second off: the end? Already? :( But this was a very awesome story, I really enjoyed reading it. Keep up the good work. PS. Can you write a sequel where Enrique becomes a love rival? Pleeeeeease? :p
Author's Response: LOL! You are too funny Helena! I know it may seem like this story was kinda short and ended kinda fast but I was running low on ideas and I thought it would be best to end while I was ahead, you know? If I had kept going it might have gotten to soap-opera-ish (too much drama). Glad you liked it and I'll seriously think about the sequel thing! Thanks for reading!
Reviewer: Teeny
Signed
Date: 03/29/05 - 04:22AM
Title: Misunderstandings and a Kiss
WTF?! I wanted a kiss between Mackenzie and Justin, not Enrique and Justin! lol I guess I did ask for it though...Oh man, that was priceless. I still maintain there should be a crotch-grab in there somewhere...lol Great update and THANK THE LORD Justin is finally telling Mackenzie how he feels!
Author's Response: Hey, you asked for the Justin Enrique kiss just like about three other people ;) Thanks for the suggestion about the crotch-grab I'll see if I can fit it in some where. LOL! Thanks so much for reviewing.....you know how much I value your opinion.
Reviewer: smrkks
Anonymous
Date: 03/28/05 - 06:00PM
Title: Misunderstandings and a Kiss
that was a great chapter. i do think that you need to elaborate more on things and be more descriptive because it's good but i'm constantly yearning for something that will just give it that extra push. something that will actually make me feel like i'm one with the character, you know? i loved the end of the chapter though. the way justin just sporadically blurted everything out. it was so cute.
Author's Response: I appreciate your constructive critisism. I'm always looking for ways to improve. I'm gonna try extra hard to give you an awesome chapter next time that will make you feel like you are a part of the story and completely blow you away; LOL!. Thanks again and let me know if I improve at all even if it's just a little bit. :)
Reviewer: Gigi
Anonymous
Date: 03/28/05 - 02:38PM
Title: Misunderstandings and a Kiss
First of all the thing with Enrique was priceless! And he finally told her how he feels.
Author's Response: Thanks!
Reviewer: anm
Anonymous
Date: 03/28/05 - 12:43PM
Title: Misunderstandings and a Kiss
yay! thank goodness he needed to tell her that now she just has to say it back and it will all be good
Author's Response: It was about time for him to spill his guts if you ask me. I was sick of skirting around the idea. :) Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: Leeann
Anonymous
Date: 03/28/05 - 12:00PM
Title: Misunderstandings and a Kiss
YAY YAY YAY can't WAIT to see what happens next.
Author's Response: YAY, YAY, YAY! Glad you like!
Reviewer: Lice
Anonymous
Date: 03/28/05 - 11:07AM
Title: Misunderstandings and a Kiss
OH MY GOD! I was only kidding but thanks for making my wish come true hahahaha.
Loved that Justin told her sopmething..even if he just told her that he wants to kiss her. LOL
Great chapter.!
Author's Response: That's what I'm all about...pleasing my readers and making thier dreams come ture...LOL! Thanks so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: Lola
Anonymous
Date: 03/28/05 - 08:21AM
Title: Misunderstandings and a Kiss
'He’s wearing a hot pink leotard. I curl my lip in disgust. I want to look away but I just can’t…..it’s like a horror film you watch through your fingers. You know you’ll have nightmares but you just have to watch. '
That was so funny. update soon.
Author's Response: That was one of my favorite parts! Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: Helena
Anonymous
Date: 03/28/05 - 04:44AM
Title: Misunderstandings and a Kiss
YAY! Justin and Enrique got it on! Thank you for that lol. And not only did they get it on, Justin and Zee might get it on too. Now that is what I call a good chapter lol. Update soon!
Author's Response: LOL! Glad you like that. You know I added the Justin and Enrique part just for you right? ;) Thanks a bunch!
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